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Render me helpless
with your touch

The fire
of desire

You ignite
each time
You look, You touch, You taste

You bring the heat
to life
within my veins

It flows
molten
swift, hot, heavy

Render me helpless
to you

I wait
anticipating.......

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Render Me Helpless

Contributed by freckle on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:11:19 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Render Me Helpless

Render me helpless
with your touch

The fire
of desire

You ignite
each time
You look, You touch, You taste

You bring the heat
to life
within my veins

It flows
molten
swift, hot, heavy

Render me helpless
to you

I wait
anticipating.......

Carol

Copyright © freckle ... [ 2005-06-15 21:11:19]
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Re: Render Me Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:26:26 PM AEST
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this reminds of a romance novel, carol. =] i see this as getting the point across, but with enough taste as to not push me like many poems on here. keep up the splendid work.

Re: Render Me Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:58:37 PM AEST
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A nice poem carol along with a nice style . . .

one of the last true poets on here . . .

Ben

Re: Render Me Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:36:30 PM AEST
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Nicely done! Classy all the way...I like it!!
Scorp.

Re: Render Me Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:45:41 PM AEST
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your simplicity is second to none..
such a strong write.. this..

B

Re: Render Me Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:55:20 PM AEST
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I agree with E9, this is very tasteful, and not at all over the top like some poems can be.

I like this. The words work well, putting an image across, without giving too much away.

Great write hun.
*hugs* Phil xxx

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