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Array ( [sid] => 98171 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rendezvouz [time] => 2005-06-15 19:13:27 [hometext] => Wasn't sure what cat this fit into.....Hope you enjoy the read.....C [bodytext] => Rendezvous

Rendezvous
just
Me
and
You

At midnight
when the night
is
young

And darkness
waits ~
to embrace

Those
who
stray
into
her
depth

She'll
hold
us
close

We
will
give
in

To
Darkness
and
the taste
of
sin

Rendezvous
just
Me
and
You

At midnight..........

Carol [comments] => 4 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 71 [informant] => freckle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

Rendezvouz

Contributed by freckle on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 07:13:27 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Rendezvous

Rendezvous
just
Me
and
You

At midnight
when the night
is
young

And darkness
waits ~
to embrace

Those
who
stray
into
her
depth

She'll
hold
us
close

We
will
give
in

To
Darkness
and
the taste
of
sin

Rendezvous
just
Me
and
You

At midnight..........

Carol

Copyright © freckle ... [ 2005-06-15 19:13:27]
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Re: Rendezvouz (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:43:46 PM AEST
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so carol, why do you use onle one word in a lot of lines? i just cant really see the point of it, unless its to make the poem seem longer. ::shrugs:: i liked how the ending rephrased the beginning very much so.

Re: Rendezvouz (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:06:52 AM AEST
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cute write like the rhytum 2 it nice lead to the end . . .

Ben

Re: Rendezvouz (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:32:53 PM AEST
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I can fully appreciate the form and composition..

creative enough to gather response, is the whole idea behind art in my opinion.

I liked it.

B

Re: Rendezvouz (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:03:07 AM AEST
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*is dissagreeing with E9 again. lol*

I like the one word thing...it makes the poem fast, and strong.

I think this flows well.

Great words hun.
*hugs*
Phil xxx

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