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YOU there…
Yes, YOU.
I am here to tell YOU I don’t like YOU.
In fact I hate YOU.
Just yesterday things were perfect in our lives.
And then he met YOU.
Now I am unsure of our tomorrow.
YOU are a threat to all of us, my happy little family.
Because of YOU my husband is changed and will never be the same.
YOU planted a little seed in him that grew and took over.
Now I have a fear inside of me that won’t go away until YOU do.
He has been mine for only 12 short years.
How dare YOU threaten this relationship?
His thoughts are of YOU.
And now YOU want to cut him in two.
I won’t deal with this.
So I say to YOU again,
I hate YOU!!!
Go away!!!
Leave our family and marriage alone.
I know who YOU are and I know what YOU do.
YOU tear families apart and leave nothing but grief in YOUR wake.
I will not back down and let YOU destroy him.
YOUR name is CANCER!
And I still hate YOU!!! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 6 [informant] => nativesunflower4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

YOU

Contributed by nativesunflower4 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:01:08 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Hey!
YOU there…
Yes, YOU.
I am here to tell YOU I don’t like YOU.
In fact I hate YOU.
Just yesterday things were perfect in our lives.
And then he met YOU.
Now I am unsure of our tomorrow.
YOU are a threat to all of us, my happy little family.
Because of YOU my husband is changed and will never be the same.
YOU planted a little seed in him that grew and took over.
Now I have a fear inside of me that won’t go away until YOU do.
He has been mine for only 12 short years.
How dare YOU threaten this relationship?
His thoughts are of YOU.
And now YOU want to cut him in two.
I won’t deal with this.
So I say to YOU again,
I hate YOU!!!
Go away!!!
Leave our family and marriage alone.
I know who YOU are and I know what YOU do.
YOU tear families apart and leave nothing but grief in YOUR wake.
I will not back down and let YOU destroy him.
YOUR name is CANCER!
And I still hate YOU!!!

Copyright Â© nativesunflower4 ... [ 2005-06-15 18:01:08]
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Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:31:30 PM AEST
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very emotional..and true. My grandmother has suffered from 3 cancers and is still fighting for her life. Cancer is one of the worst things to happen. Good work!

Re: YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 02:15:32 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
Keep the faith.
huggs, prayer,
emy

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