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Array ( [sid] => 98143 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sitting here dying, Do you care? [time] => 2005-06-15 14:47:30 [hometext] => This poem has alot of repetion, and you may have to look deep in the poem to understand it. [bodytext] => Sitting there
Thinking back
As the days go by
Will I ever be the same
Maybe before I die

Sitting here
Thinking back
As the days go by
Would it be the same rite now
if my love hadn't said good-bye

Sitting there
Thinking back
As the days go by
Cutting and slashing
I will alwayz deny

Sitting here
Thinking back
As the days go by
Suicide is my only hope
This I say is no Lie

Sitting there
Thinking back
As the days go by
laying on the floor, i'm dead
My letter is by my side

Sitting here
Thinking back
As the days go by
In the the gates between heaven and hell
Was suicide a sin, i cry

Sitting there
Thinking back
As the days go by
God has sent me, up I go
Thank you for saving me Lord

Sitting here
Thinking back
As the days go by
Save yourself before you try
To say good-bye and die.
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Sitting here dying, Do you care?

Contributed by kj2947 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 02:47:30 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Sitting there
Thinking back
As the days go by
Will I ever be the same
Maybe before I die

Sitting here
Thinking back
As the days go by
Would it be the same rite now
if my love hadn't said good-bye

Sitting there
Thinking back
As the days go by
Cutting and slashing
I will alwayz deny

Sitting here
Thinking back
As the days go by
Suicide is my only hope
This I say is no Lie

Sitting there
Thinking back
As the days go by
laying on the floor, i'm dead
My letter is by my side

Sitting here
Thinking back
As the days go by
In the the gates between heaven and hell
Was suicide a sin, i cry

Sitting there
Thinking back
As the days go by
God has sent me, up I go
Thank you for saving me Lord

Sitting here
Thinking back
As the days go by
Save yourself before you try
To say good-bye and die.

Copyright © kj2947 ... [ 2005-06-15 14:47:30]
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Re: Sitting here dying, Do you care? (User Rating: 1 )
by cocacola1331 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 02:57:40 PM AEST
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I don't really comment much on this site, but wow, I happened to come across your poem and was thoroughly impressed. Very touching... I like the repetition, I think it added a more... hm, thought-provoking element to the poem. Good job, and keep up the good work.

Also. The real content of the poem, what the words are just screaming out.... man, I can definitely relate to all of that. Please, try to hang in there... it's what I'm doing, at least.

Re: Sitting here dying, Do you care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 03:20:05 PM AEST
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kj2947

Some will cry Lord,Lord and not be saved
To follow Christ one must pick up his cross and follow Him
To be Christian is to be called to suffer
Life is His prcious gift
Judas---better a mill-stone be tied around your neck than to kill yourself
Unless one is terribly depressed I don't think suicide is accepeable
Would anyone care ? a few for a ahort while
The poem was good

Sinned

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