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Array ( [sid] => 98112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => let the anger out [time] => 2005-06-15 05:09:45 [hometext] => just me ranting again :) [bodytext] => ohh but things have changed
days become shorter
and life goes by quicker
i think of this
in my sobered state of nothingness
as the moments turned to time
and time turned to this nothing
this nothing left me void
blank and oh so empty
as I stared into it
and faded away from who I was
what I was, gone to who
I can be, someday, maybe
and you, you you you
penetrate my soul
i swear i loved you
"repeat it in my head
one billion times
until it seems
true"
melancholy baby
that's what its all about
this glass is cracking
and it doesn't matter if its half empty or half full
tomorrow can never come
and i wont care
just treat me like you know who i am
because you probably don't
and that's ok
just pray tomorrow never comes
its the only thing holding my hatred at bay [comments] => 4 [counter] => 537 [topic] => 43 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

let the anger out

Contributed by socialmisfit on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:09:45 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

ohh but things have changed
days become shorter
and life goes by quicker
i think of this
in my sobered state of nothingness
as the moments turned to time
and time turned to this nothing
this nothing left me void
blank and oh so empty
as I stared into it
and faded away from who I was
what I was, gone to who
I can be, someday, maybe
and you, you you you
penetrate my soul
i swear i loved you
"repeat it in my head
one billion times
until it seems
true"
melancholy baby
that's what its all about
this glass is cracking
and it doesn't matter if its half empty or half full
tomorrow can never come
and i wont care
just treat me like you know who i am
because you probably don't
and that's ok
just pray tomorrow never comes
its the only thing holding my hatred at bay

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-06-15 05:09:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: let the anger out (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:09:39 AM AEST
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Great rantin.
Keep letting it out.
huggs, strngth,
emy

Re: let the anger out (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:28:28 PM AEST
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Wow great job.

Re: let the anger out (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 02:25:57 PM AEST
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Wow this is intense...love the ending! I really like this part; "I swear I loved you, repeat it in my head one billion times until it seems true..." Nicely done!!
Scorp.

Re: let the anger out (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:51:08 AM AEST
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This was really good. I liked it. It flowed perfect even if you were ranting.. great job

christina

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