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Array ( [sid] => 98109 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Inner conflict [time] => 2005-06-15 01:32:55 [hometext] => I signed my rights away 7yrs ago. I had a son named Ethan. [bodytext] => Ok, I know you've made some mistakes in the past.
You've punished yourself over and over.
This pain doesn't have to last.
You loved your child with your whole heart.
It's not your fault
Someone else tore you apart.
Ok, now I know what you're gonna say,
"I chose to sign those papers
and give my child away."
Well you know, YOU ARE RIGHT,
D.C.F.S wouldn't leave you alone,
They harassed you day and night.
Val, It's time to start loving yourself again.
You have to forgive yourself
and become your best friend.
PLEASE, stop living through this pain.
You did the best you could do...
You are not to blame.
Love always, your conscience

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Inner conflict

Contributed by grin69 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:32:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Ok, I know you've made some mistakes in the past.
You've punished yourself over and over.
This pain doesn't have to last.
You loved your child with your whole heart.
It's not your fault
Someone else tore you apart.
Ok, now I know what you're gonna say,
"I chose to sign those papers
and give my child away."
Well you know, YOU ARE RIGHT,
D.C.F.S wouldn't leave you alone,
They harassed you day and night.
Val, It's time to start loving yourself again.
You have to forgive yourself
and become your best friend.
PLEASE, stop living through this pain.
You did the best you could do...
You are not to blame.
Love always, your conscience

Copyright © grin69 ... [ 2005-06-15 01:32:55]
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Re: Inner conflict (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:54:55 AM AEST
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... This is very sad and is hard to read and is even harder to comment on I am sorry for your pain and it is true that it isnt your fault you did what you could and thats all you can do, I am sorry and I will pray for you. Please dont give up and keep posting, hope to read you later. Be well.

*H_S*

Re: Inner conflict (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 02:12:53 AM AEST
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This is a fine testiment to all that read it 'cause I see a great luv for a child in this write.
It's sad but still a masterpeice.
I can't imagene how u feel but I can see a luv of a good mother in this write.
Hang in there as he will be grown before u can blink twice. I'm sure he'll understand someday.
I've got a grandson close to his age I can't see but I'm writing him a book of poetry to read when he's old enuff too.
I wish u luv, hope, joy, peace, good things,
emy

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