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I feel as if you’re so far away
Almost unreachable
Every time I think of you I smile to myself
I love to hear your voice
It makes me be in a trance that makes me smile
Every time I talk to you I hope you say something
But sadly you don’t
I just want you to know that I’ll wait
I’ll wait for the day you’re ready to tell me
That when you think of me you smile
I can’t wait until the day I hear
When you hear my voice your in a trance
Sometimes I wish I could just tell you how I feel
But I know you wouldn’t like that
You know everything about me
And that hurts me
It hurts
I feel so vulnerable when I’m a round you
I feel when I’m with you there’s no one else
Sometimes I wish I could hug and kiss you forever
But you’re still Unreachable
One day you won’t be and on that day
I’ll tell you that when I saw you I smiled
When you said hello
I fell in your trance
And I’ll wait for you to tell me the same
But I’ll have to wait for that day
They day I finally see you
My guy
The perfect guy
The unreachable
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Unreachable

Contributed by Rockloser169 on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:00:17 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry




I feel as if you’re so far away
Almost unreachable
Every time I think of you I smile to myself
I love to hear your voice
It makes me be in a trance that makes me smile
Every time I talk to you I hope you say something
But sadly you don’t
I just want you to know that I’ll wait
I’ll wait for the day you’re ready to tell me
That when you think of me you smile
I can’t wait until the day I hear
When you hear my voice your in a trance
Sometimes I wish I could just tell you how I feel
But I know you wouldn’t like that
You know everything about me
And that hurts me
It hurts
I feel so vulnerable when I’m a round you
I feel when I’m with you there’s no one else
Sometimes I wish I could hug and kiss you forever
But you’re still Unreachable
One day you won’t be and on that day
I’ll tell you that when I saw you I smiled
When you said hello
I fell in your trance
And I’ll wait for you to tell me the same
But I’ll have to wait for that day
They day I finally see you
My guy
The perfect guy
The unreachable




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Re: Unreachable (User Rating: 1 )
by discantbelife on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:05:10 PM AEST
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Deep i love it...i think we all feel this at times


Re: Unreachable (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:10:04 PM AEST
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WOW!!!

I loved this you really portrayed your emotions , and thoughts beautifully and with such honesty

Leia


Re: Unreachable (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:55:36 PM AEST
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good write. i really like the end.


Re: Unreachable (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:51:51 PM AEST
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man, this si deep, this is like grammy worthy, if , ya know, I acknowladged teh grammys as somthign worthwile instead of as an insult to true musicians everywere.




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