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but you and i know my mother want let us be
i would climb the highest mountain for you
go across the valleys
i am your women and that is what i suppose to do
i hurt so bad just to love you
and damn, i hurt so bad just to keep you, but i feel at
times i have to let you go, because my heart at times tells me so
i was always told when you really love someone let them
go
i did, now i 'm back with you feeling the same
like an actress waiting for her time of fame
there are so many who don't want us together
i need you just as well as you need me and i hope
it can last forever
maybe my mother want understand, but i guess
i have to fight for you to have my hand [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => seci [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

love battle

Contributed by seci on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:07:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i care for you just as much as you care for me
but you and i know my mother want let us be
i would climb the highest mountain for you
go across the valleys
i am your women and that is what i suppose to do
i hurt so bad just to love you
and damn, i hurt so bad just to keep you, but i feel at
times i have to let you go, because my heart at times tells me so
i was always told when you really love someone let them
go
i did, now i 'm back with you feeling the same
like an actress waiting for her time of fame
there are so many who don't want us together
i need you just as well as you need me and i hope
it can last forever
maybe my mother want understand, but i guess
i have to fight for you to have my hand

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Re: love battle (User Rating: 1 )
by brittaney on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:52:50 PM AEST
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I know how this feels! Good write
Brittaney~

Re: love battle (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:34:31 PM AEST
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wow.. I think my heart just missed a beat.. your poem creates reality in all who has ever loved.. love hurts.. its genuine.. its certainly not a toy to play with.. lots of feelings in the poem you wrote.. all I can say.. is for the leading character in the poem . go gettem tiger... Raquel Leah..

Re: love battle (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:37:01 PM AEST
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Great write! Stay strong!

--amanda--

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