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Array ( [sid] => 98054 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => mr. september [time] => 2005-06-14 17:09:56 [hometext] => dont ask why im writing about september in june cuz i will not know the answer lol [bodytext] => come capture me

Those autumn leaves
swirling in the breeze
come capture me

the vibrant colors
as creation gets pulled under
come capture me

stars gleaming bright
among the fair night
come capture me

in the twilight hours
i can sence the powers
come capture me

view the sunset & sunrise
as you envision my demise
come capture me

glare into the cloudy haze
help refocus my daze
come capture me

embrace the figid breath
allow the season to refresh
come capture me

mr. september
ill forever remember
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mr. september

Contributed by starry_eyed_soul on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 05:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

come capture me

Those autumn leaves
swirling in the breeze
come capture me

the vibrant colors
as creation gets pulled under
come capture me

stars gleaming bright
among the fair night
come capture me

in the twilight hours
i can sence the powers
come capture me

view the sunset & sunrise
as you envision my demise
come capture me

glare into the cloudy haze
help refocus my daze
come capture me

embrace the figid breath
allow the season to refresh
come capture me

mr. september
ill forever remember
come capture me

Copyright © starry_eyed_soul ... [ 2005-06-14 17:09:56]
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Re: mr. september (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:05:57 PM AEST
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Very nice, creative and cute. Keep it up.

--amanda--

Re: mr. september (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:08:33 PM AEST
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Its sort of difficult to comment on anothers writing piece.. I think its very lovely.. one soul standing in one place, yet everywhere.. just like our Lord is with us always and yet everywhere.. I won't ask you if the one whom you want to capture you is human or spirit.. does not matter.. I hope what captures you is a good thing.. I love your poem.. I can vividly see you standing there. Raquel Leah

Re: mr. september (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:35:10 AM AEST
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wow i love the style u used on this... it like makes it so much more powerful. the repeating of "come capture me" just made it amazing. great job.
luv n hugs,
jennie* xXx

Re: mr. september (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 05:40:44 AM AEST
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This could be about love and autumn. It is very unique and I haven't seen anything quite written like it. WOW and double WOWWWW

I hope mr. september will come capture you...

May all your dreams come true...

Kie

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