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Time eats the brains occurrence
The season changes in mind and air
Sun beats down, my skin feels nothing
Can the thoughts of happiness consume?
My despair is shown to world with vengeance
Rain falls but not wet
Their partnership of nothingness and hatred
What did your tears solve?
Quality of life stuck on survive
When did I render my sole to thoughts of hate?
Thoughts of riddle
Try to justify the collapsed chest
I submit my slowly pumping vessel to your falsity
My letters on letters of insult prove me remorseful
Image of perfection lingers in breeze
A blessed sole goes to that in need
But cursed are those who are not
Luck not to change for ether obligation
Strong wind brings space of colors
Unjust advantage brings cold feet to calm mind
Admiration still but with more reason
Harsh motionless break in storm

I can not show you

I can not tell you

Honest words of heart quieted by lack of sight
Lack of courage.

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Stuck on Survive

Contributed by Boobiepeach on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 03:53:10 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Line between imagination and real memory
Time eats the brains occurrence
The season changes in mind and air
Sun beats down, my skin feels nothing
Can the thoughts of happiness consume?
My despair is shown to world with vengeance
Rain falls but not wet
Their partnership of nothingness and hatred
What did your tears solve?
Quality of life stuck on survive
When did I render my sole to thoughts of hate?
Thoughts of riddle
Try to justify the collapsed chest
I submit my slowly pumping vessel to your falsity
My letters on letters of insult prove me remorseful
Image of perfection lingers in breeze
A blessed sole goes to that in need
But cursed are those who are not
Luck not to change for ether obligation
Strong wind brings space of colors
Unjust advantage brings cold feet to calm mind
Admiration still but with more reason
Harsh motionless break in storm

I can not show you

I can not tell you

Honest words of heart quieted by lack of sight
Lack of courage.

Copyright © Boobiepeach ... [ 2005-06-14 15:53:10]
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Re: Stuck on Survive (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:05:53 PM AEST
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Sensational! :o)

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