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[aid] => mick
[title] => So far....
[time] => 2005-06-14 13:48:37
[hometext] => This is a slam poem (competiteve spoken poetry) that i wrote awhile back
[bodytext] => We lie here, bound, in sinful sweetness, Your blue velvet passion trickles down, through and over my limbs….reaching out to me, in this tiny space filled with nervous, jumping molecules, wishing me to embrace it… But you are so far from me, so far from love, so far… a pointless endeavor…. Well, so far, that is… And now after we’ve merged and exploded, imploded into ourselves, mingling in my mirror like a movie, a midnight showing, forbidden for those day walkers, those creatures of the light….here we are, away from them, in bliss..in eternity, eternally in this moment… So far…. So far down that the ends of our nerves are destroyed, blitzed, burned out and tired, causing numbness, causing so much sensation that it becomes far too much, far too soon, far too real, and far too quiet….so far… We are, so into each other in so many different ways, hoping so much that this will never end, wanting so badly to keep it, savor it, replay it..over and over and over again until it wears down, and we have to create it anew….we are so, so, in love, So strange to the touch, strangers in love, strangers in loathing…..so strangely, sweetly, in love. And I don’t even know you. But you are so lovely, so livid, so languid…you are tantalizingly passionately and beautifully unknown…but then again….that’s only because you are unfamiliar, something different, something new and clean and freshly seasoned to a pinnacle of taste….something that could never go wrong, never end, never die…but isn’t that so far from the truth? Because all good things must end, and this…this is one damn...good...thing. Well, so far…that is. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ShesAKillerQueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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