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Array ( [sid] => 98023 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You did this to me! [time] => 2005-06-14 13:47:01 [hometext] => About an Abusive controlling relationship...and the anger that comes after. comments strongly appreciated [bodytext] => Whispers in the back of my twisted mind,
Evil deeds,
Lurking,
Urging me to proceed.
Deep in the darkness I wait,
Dormant in the shadows.
Crawling in the damp filth of this world
Waiting to recede from the sorrows.
The torture of living this putrid life,
So much unbridled rage.
The urges to kill,
The hate begins.
It consumes my essence whole.

You did this to me!

With your violent swings,
Your contradicting actions
And you cynical words.
Those words.
Those hurtful, hateful words.
Bruised broken dreams.
Shattered hopes.
Plummeting self-esteem.
Physical pain as my bones broke.

You did this to me!

With you controlling attempts
To run my life.
Your loathing way,
Of expressing your so-called love.
The grinding pain that I felt,
Every time that you would,
Pronounce that fabricated love.
You disgust me.
The terror I once felt in your presence
Has transformed into
A deep purified hate.
Tears no longer escape me
Just the uncontrollable need,
To hurt and punish you.
Make you feel all the aguish I felt.
The hope that you know,
And remember well.

You did this to me!
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You did this to me!

Contributed by GurlyTye on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 01:47:01 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Whispers in the back of my twisted mind,
Evil deeds,
Lurking,
Urging me to proceed.
Deep in the darkness I wait,
Dormant in the shadows.
Crawling in the damp filth of this world
Waiting to recede from the sorrows.
The torture of living this putrid life,
So much unbridled rage.
The urges to kill,
The hate begins.
It consumes my essence whole.

You did this to me!

With your violent swings,
Your contradicting actions
And you cynical words.
Those words.
Those hurtful, hateful words.
Bruised broken dreams.
Shattered hopes.
Plummeting self-esteem.
Physical pain as my bones broke.

You did this to me!

With you controlling attempts
To run my life.
Your loathing way,
Of expressing your so-called love.
The grinding pain that I felt,
Every time that you would,
Pronounce that fabricated love.
You disgust me.
The terror I once felt in your presence
Has transformed into
A deep purified hate.
Tears no longer escape me
Just the uncontrollable need,
To hurt and punish you.
Make you feel all the aguish I felt.
The hope that you know,
And remember well.

You did this to me!

Copyright Â© GurlyTye ... [ 2005-06-14 13:47:01]
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Re: You did this to me! (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:48:51 AM AEST
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Well Tye this write has a lot of emotion and hate in it but I know you know that already. It had a good flow and kept the reader drawn it to the pain you were trying to portray. I'm sorry you have to feel pain like this and your in my thoughts. I’m not sure why you didn’t get more comments I thought it was a good write but it does have a lot of hurt in it. Your in my thoughts girl and its good to see your work back on the site. Take care and keep your head up. Your friend….Steve

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