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Array ( [sid] => 97977 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To always feel at home [time] => 2005-06-14 00:45:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Those first words

Though simple words

They meant the world to me

Because they were honest words

Filled with kindness and sweetness abound

I still remember them

How you said what you saw in me was something

You had only dreamed of

As I got to know you I found

You to be beautiful beyond all my dreams

More amazing than my words could say

And I find you to be more so every day

I fell in love with you

Slowly you fell in love with me

I would have settle to just have met you

But you did and I am grateful

And that changed my life

As you became my world

I became whole

You have done so much for me

More than any one could ever do

You bring out the very best in me

In a way that no one else could

The pharos of your soul

Have been my guiding light

When ever I have been lost at sea

You have given me back my faith

Just to know that I am always in you prayers

Mean so much to me

Just to know you care is enough

To show me the way out of darkness

You help underset the ocean of my hopes

Everything that I have special in me now

I have because of you

Together we have planted

Seeds of love that will someday grow

And blossom into something this world has never seen

Something pure and sweet and kind

Something made up of two hearts two bodies and two minds

Something made up of one soul

I bind my self to you for all eternity

So we would never drift apart

Never be alone

Never need anything but each other

To always belong some where

To for ever feel at home
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To always feel at home

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:45:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Those first words

Though simple words

They meant the world to me

Because they were honest words

Filled with kindness and sweetness abound

I still remember them

How you said what you saw in me was something

You had only dreamed of

As I got to know you I found

You to be beautiful beyond all my dreams

More amazing than my words could say

And I find you to be more so every day

I fell in love with you

Slowly you fell in love with me

I would have settle to just have met you

But you did and I am grateful

And that changed my life

As you became my world

I became whole

You have done so much for me

More than any one could ever do

You bring out the very best in me

In a way that no one else could

The pharos of your soul

Have been my guiding light

When ever I have been lost at sea

You have given me back my faith

Just to know that I am always in you prayers

Mean so much to me

Just to know you care is enough

To show me the way out of darkness

You help underset the ocean of my hopes

Everything that I have special in me now

I have because of you

Together we have planted

Seeds of love that will someday grow

And blossom into something this world has never seen

Something pure and sweet and kind

Something made up of two hearts two bodies and two minds

Something made up of one soul

I bind my self to you for all eternity

So we would never drift apart

Never be alone

Never need anything but each other

To always belong some where

To for ever feel at home




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Re: To always feel at home (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 01:11:19 AM AEST
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Wow!
Another masterpeice of deep inner beauty.
huggs,
emy


Re: To always feel at home (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 02:29:17 AM AEST
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you will neve be alone,muaw


Re: To always feel at home (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:33:00 AM AEST
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To have that kind of deep and wonderful feelings are ones you never want to get rid of in a million years. Excellent write.

Brew~


Re: To always feel at home (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:12:43 PM AEST
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Really lovely poem. Had flu this week so not been able to come on the site but will catch up on ur poems over this next week or so.

Love Angelxxx


Re: To always feel at home (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:17:51 PM AEST
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Woops wrong Dorien. Still your poem was lovely.

Love Angelxxx




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