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Array ( [sid] => 97969 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sucide [time] => 2005-06-13 23:29:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My nightmares become reality,
but i am not scared anymore.
i know that i am not going to live much longer,
As i pick the knife up of the floor.

A Quick slice here,
i can't feel the pain.
I Haven't cut far enough,
i'll have to slice again.

I hate this ritual,
i hate this knife,
i hate myself,
all most as much as i hate life.

Dig My Grave,
Dig It Well.
Leave A Black Rose.
And Let It Dwell.
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Sucide

Contributed by Red_Spyder_Pixie on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:29:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

My nightmares become reality,
but i am not scared anymore.
i know that i am not going to live much longer,
As i pick the knife up of the floor.

A Quick slice here,
i can't feel the pain.
I Haven't cut far enough,
i'll have to slice again.

I hate this ritual,
i hate this knife,
i hate myself,
all most as much as i hate life.

Dig My Grave,
Dig It Well.
Leave A Black Rose.
And Let It Dwell.

Copyright Â© Red_Spyder_Pixie ... [ 2005-06-13 23:29:49]
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Re: Sucide (User Rating: 1 )
by expired_promises on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:51:34 PM AEST
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your poem is beatifully written please channel more of your feelings on the topic and about life in generalthrough poetry, than actually going to through with the act of suicide. keep writing you are very talented

Re: Sucide (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:13:44 AM AEST
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This poem was very well written and I to have written on this subject. I hope you will write more and release your pains for us to read. Take care and I look forward to more writes….Steve

Re: Sucide (User Rating: 1 )
by Mikki on Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 04:51:19 PM AEST
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.. Man that was good.
I wrote a poem (just submitted it) about suicide too, called Suicide Note... so I think I know that thoughts that went through your mind as you wrote this.
If I'm right.. please, PLEASE don't do something you'll regret. Actions lead to obsessions, and obsessions aren't always for the best. :C
But this was an amazing piece of poetry! ^.^

~ Mikki

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