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I hope there weren't many of these
The negatives are incriminating
Fortunately, numerous were double exposures
Oh, Oh, they managed to obtain one good set of prints

We'll have to develop a plan, to establish my innocence
Circumstances are not just black and white, for instance
I must make adjustments to better focus
Without a clear picture, there is no evidence
It might be a frame-up, hope I don't get shot

The scene reflects with a glare
So I can't focus on what is out there
A film formed over my lens
Consequently, I see best when I close my eyes and visualize
Less distortion as I shutter with facing the possibilities

There is a risk of over exposure, with pictures of evidence
Most turned out well, except mine, what a coincidence
Must reload to get another angle
Perhaps a telephoto lens will provide more clarity
They just informed me, they found one worth framing

Oh No!

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Double Exposure

Contributed by Willofree on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:30:21 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

You've got a photograph, hey that's of me
I hope there weren't many of these
The negatives are incriminating
Fortunately, numerous were double exposures
Oh, Oh, they managed to obtain one good set of prints

We'll have to develop a plan, to establish my innocence
Circumstances are not just black and white, for instance
I must make adjustments to better focus
Without a clear picture, there is no evidence
It might be a frame-up, hope I don't get shot

The scene reflects with a glare
So I can't focus on what is out there
A film formed over my lens
Consequently, I see best when I close my eyes and visualize
Less distortion as I shutter with facing the possibilities

There is a risk of over exposure, with pictures of evidence
Most turned out well, except mine, what a coincidence
Must reload to get another angle
Perhaps a telephoto lens will provide more clarity
They just informed me, they found one worth framing

Oh No!

Copyright © Willofree ... [ 2005-06-13 15:30:21]
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Re: Double Exposure (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:14:51 PM AEST
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Heehee. I like the end of this.

I'm sorta lost with the poem though. I'm kinda wondering what you did that was so incriminating...

I like the stye though. It has a flow all of its own.

Great write,
Phil xxx

Re: Double Exposure (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:09:59 PM AEST
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well done

Re: Double Exposure (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:32:02 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the humor. UhOh, here they come with the frame. lololol

Rita

Re: Double Exposure (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:41:07 PM AEST
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LOL..I enjoyed this, Will..Thank you dor sharing it...
Jenni

Re: Double Exposure (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:26:10 PM AEST
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i know someone that doesnt like their picture taken because they dont want to be remembered. i cant say i liked the hey, and the oh oh. this is different and i think that i rather like the way you write the way you usually do better. plus me and humorous poems just dont get along.

Re: Double Exposure (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:18:31 PM AEST
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Hahaha! very nice poem.. i kept wondering throughout the whole thing what the picture was all about.. and why it was so incriminating. I liked it a lot cause it had a good sense of humour and allowed open ended interpretations.

good write

dw

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