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Array ( [sid] => 97908 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => emptying my burden [time] => 2005-06-13 14:09:18 [hometext] => R.M.Wilder [bodytext] => this is the last of the three for the day
its so hard when you have so much to say
writing my words for the world to see
has brought me a joy i didnt think was in me
but in my poems i leave a little of me behind
some of the pain and anger i hide
im just looking for love and exceptence in this life
to feel the touch of a love one at night
so this is my last poem of the day
hopefully it will take some of my pain away
i will spill my soal tommorow and the day after that
until my anger and sorrow will someday go flat
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emptying my burden

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:09:18 PM in AEST
Topic: didactic

this is the last of the three for the day
its so hard when you have so much to say
writing my words for the world to see
has brought me a joy i didnt think was in me
but in my poems i leave a little of me behind
some of the pain and anger i hide
im just looking for love and exceptence in this life
to feel the touch of a love one at night
so this is my last poem of the day
hopefully it will take some of my pain away
i will spill my soal tommorow and the day after that
until my anger and sorrow will someday go flat

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-06-13 14:09:18]
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Re: emptying my burden (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:24:55 PM AEST
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I like this. I remember feeling like this. I think if you keep writing, you do have the talent, that you will be free of a lot of pain. Somehow getting it out and expressing it where you can see it in front of you, it makes it easier to deal with, rather than knotted up inside you where you can't think clearly about it. Keep writing and I truly do hope it helps. Rita

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