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Array ( [sid] => 97836 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Recycled Lover [time] => 2005-06-12 21:58:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Only with you
Do my feet go numb
Do my tiresome legs feel
They can suddenly run
Only in your arms
Do I feel at ease and calm
The taste of your honey
Melts my face
And the beat goes on and on

Our feet meet
Under the table
Locked eyes
A retina trembles
Its suicide
Yet you resemble
What I once felt inside
Nothing I despise
Nothing that breeches
Something so spontaneous
As loving you
As remembering
Something brand new

________
____

When the ticking clock strikes its dot
The thickening story begins to grasp the plot…

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jyssvw [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Recycled Lover

Contributed by jyssvw on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:58:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Only with you
Do my feet go numb
Do my tiresome legs feel
They can suddenly run
Only in your arms
Do I feel at ease and calm
The taste of your honey
Melts my face
And the beat goes on and on

Our feet meet
Under the table
Locked eyes
A retina trembles
Its suicide
Yet you resemble
What I once felt inside
Nothing I despise
Nothing that breeches
Something so spontaneous
As loving you
As remembering
Something brand new

________
____

When the ticking clock strikes its dot
The thickening story begins to grasp the plot…

Copyright Â© jyssvw ... [ 2005-06-12 21:58:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Recycled Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:06:00 PM AEST
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this is a great write but i think i would have looked for a better word than Recycled brings back lots of bad memories when used with lover

shivers down spine

Re: Recycled Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:16:12 PM AEST
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She sure sounds special Jyss...Nice write. Can't wait for the story to unfold...
Scorp.

Re: Recycled Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:55:05 PM AEST
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"sent shivers down doriens spine..."
Bravo!

Art is meant to gather reaction..whether good or bad..It's purpose is to do such things..
and you've accomplished that.

B

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