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Array ( [sid] => 97820 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You never loved me [time] => 2005-06-12 20:16:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So tell me
What am I feelin
I think I love you
But I'm fadin
I think you never loved me
I want you still, but I
Kno it will kill me
So break me
Slit my throat
Maybe I'll feel better
Spill a little blood
Maybe I'll cure the disease
Hello misery my old friend
I want an excuse
For my pathetic life
So beat me down
Take a pound of flesh
From me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 13 [informant] => emokid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
You never loved me

Contributed by emokid on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:16:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



So tell me
What am I feelin
I think I love you
But I'm fadin
I think you never loved me
I want you still, but I
Kno it will kill me
So break me
Slit my throat
Maybe I'll feel better
Spill a little blood
Maybe I'll cure the disease
Hello misery my old friend
I want an excuse
For my pathetic life
So beat me down
Take a pound of flesh
From me.




Copyright © emokid ... [ 2005-06-12 20:16:58]
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Re: You never loved me (User Rating: 1 )
by brittaney on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:19:33 PM AEST
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Wow when I read this, my throat honestly hurt because your word choices were so strong. Good write!
Brittaney~


Re: You never loved me (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:34:59 PM AEST
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great write! all though i hope no throat slicing occurs. and don't worry- i can totally relate. good work and good luck!!!

~sprints


Re: You never loved me (User Rating: 1 )
by je2ica3 on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:48:24 PM AEST
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wow those are like really strong words.i like that you chose the title you never loved me cause ive noticed they really never dothey just seem to say it and its always a lie well great write.
*Je2ica3*


Re: You never loved me (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:24:25 PM AEST
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powerful words and heart-wrenching emotions just jump off the page. very raw and honest so i think this is a fantastic piece of poetry!
look after yourself wont you, well done & keep it up




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