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Array ( [sid] => 97783 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A note left upon the table... [time] => 2005-06-12 17:24:52 [hometext] => Please dont read until u've read my other poem first.. suicidal girl.. this may not make too much sense if you read it first, but you're welcome to. I'm new to writing poetry, but I'm giving this a shot, thanks. [bodytext] => A note left upon the table...

Dear mommy,
I've thought about doing this for many many weeks,
for you have left scars upon my purple bruised cheeks,
but now it's finally over.. over and done,
and i bet you're celebrating with everyone,

my life was horrible; was that so hard to see?,
daddy hit and swore and you didnt love me,
daddy would have killed me anyways..maybe stragled me with a cord,
but now im in a better place up here with the lord,

you know when my big brother John dislocated my knee?,
now I'm with someone that actually cares about me,
but he wasnt the only one that i was hated by,
you, him and daddy always made me cry,

But i love you even though it's very hard to see,
i do my best to love you even though you don't love me,
When katie gets older.. tell her i loved her so,
and the reason i slipped away was because it was my time to go,

mommy.. just take good care of Katie; this is what i plea,
Just please don't ever do what you did to me... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 36 [informant] => youngpoet [notes] => (Edited for spelling by Mod_11) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
A note left upon the table...

Contributed by youngpoet on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 05:24:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



A note left upon the table...

Dear mommy,
I've thought about doing this for many many weeks,
for you have left scars upon my purple bruised cheeks,
but now it's finally over.. over and done,
and i bet you're celebrating with everyone,

my life was horrible; was that so hard to see?,
daddy hit and swore and you didnt love me,
daddy would have killed me anyways..maybe stragled me with a cord,
but now im in a better place up here with the lord,

you know when my big brother John dislocated my knee?,
now I'm with someone that actually cares about me,
but he wasnt the only one that i was hated by,
you, him and daddy always made me cry,

But i love you even though it's very hard to see,
i do my best to love you even though you don't love me,
When katie gets older.. tell her i loved her so,
and the reason i slipped away was because it was my time to go,

mommy.. just take good care of Katie; this is what i plea,
Just please don't ever do what you did to me...




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Re: A note left upon the table... (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 06:14:48 PM AEST
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:tear: This was really really good BRAVO I must say!! please keep writting your words are so good I donno This has left me speechless so I will stop rambling and just say good job


Re: A note left upon the table... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:18:12 PM AEST
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Very touching..and so well written....
I hope to see many more writes from you..
You have some great talent here..
Jenni


Re: A note left upon the table... (User Rating: 1 )
by judasman on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:02:15 PM AEST
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just as good as the first, sometimes i really hate the world we live in, and the people who live in it


Re: A note left upon the table... (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:19:32 AM AEST
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how sad...brought a tear to my eye...very touching & i am sorry for the way your parents are treating you...you do not deserve it. They should be loving you & cherishing you with evrythin.. i am So sorry..i cant even start to comprehend the abuse you have been afflicted by. please pm me anytime you need to talk, i will always talk.
till then, keep writing, your thoughts and writing are brilliant.


Re: A note left upon the table... (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:21:16 AM AEST
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Very touching, you're a good writer, keep it up.

--amanda--




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