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Array ( [sid] => 97773 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She [time] => 2005-06-12 16:14:10 [hometext] => just a little dedication to my sweetest friend, who will forever hold my heart [bodytext] => She reminds me of Japan, and that makes me happy.

she looks like exotic flowers and smells like a fresh start.

she dances wildly, like the rain in summer and doesnt care whos watching.

she knows better and does worse.

she doesnt fall, she dives into love.

and never looks back but learns from my mistakes.

she moves like a kitten,

reads like a book with ten thousand metaphors,

and teaches me how to be innocent.

I think of her, robed in light gray purity and commited to a religion that doesnt exist just yet.

She is bohemian, she is conservative, she is the saddest happy person i know and she is so mesmerizingly beautiful.

She hates my bad habits because she loves me.

she makes me think of blue-green breakers in mexico and lovely little arctic foxes.

she is contradiction and stability.

she is my darling, my devoted friend,

Sophie

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She

Contributed by ShesAKillerQueen on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:14:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



She reminds me of Japan, and that makes me happy.

she looks like exotic flowers and smells like a fresh start.

she dances wildly, like the rain in summer and doesnt care whos watching.

she knows better and does worse.

she doesnt fall, she dives into love.

and never looks back but learns from my mistakes.

she moves like a kitten,

reads like a book with ten thousand metaphors,

and teaches me how to be innocent.

I think of her, robed in light gray purity and commited to a religion that doesnt exist just yet.

She is bohemian, she is conservative, she is the saddest happy person i know and she is so mesmerizingly beautiful.

She hates my bad habits because she loves me.

she makes me think of blue-green breakers in mexico and lovely little arctic foxes.

she is contradiction and stability.

she is my darling, my devoted friend,

Sophie





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Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 10:25:20 AM AEST
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What a lovely poem! I am so suprised that there are not more comments! This reminds me of some of my writings and I love the freedom you have used in expressing her...absolutely wonderful!

I hope you have shared this with her and that she has appreciated it! What a fun person she must be from the way you have described her! May everyone be blessed with a friend like that!

Thanks so much for sharing this poem.

Carol


Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:02:07 PM AEST
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:) this is such a wonderful read. great words. u seem 2 love ur friend very much!

she must feel proud!




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