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Array ( [sid] => 97727 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => tainted emotions [time] => 2005-06-12 01:00:36 [hometext] => from my experience [bodytext] => oh so much she plays with me
and how she can never see
how my torn heart will never be
as it was before she and i became no longer we

as she made my hopes touch the sky
she cut off my wings so those hopes would die
and forever as i look up high
all i will be able to say is why

for my love she did abuse
and my possessions she did use
and my heart she did lose

she was my first love
more pure and beautiful that a dove

but she had another
and to her i was like a brother
so forever more shall i have no lover
for there will never be another
like Rachel [comments] => 4 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Chaser [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

tainted emotions

Contributed by Chaser on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:00:36 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

oh so much she plays with me
and how she can never see
how my torn heart will never be
as it was before she and i became no longer we

as she made my hopes touch the sky
she cut off my wings so those hopes would die
and forever as i look up high
all i will be able to say is why

for my love she did abuse
and my possessions she did use
and my heart she did lose

she was my first love
more pure and beautiful that a dove

but she had another
and to her i was like a brother
so forever more shall i have no lover
for there will never be another
like Rachel

Copyright © Chaser ... [ 2005-06-12 01:00:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: tainted emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:33:27 AM AEST
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you've done a great job and i really enjoyed reading this poem, i could really sense your pain and yes there is nothing worse than heart ache. I have been through a similar ordeal as yourself so I could relate to your sentiments. I am sorry for the pain you must be feeling, but maybe someone else will come along and treat you in the way you rightly deserve. so anyway, i liked this poem very much. good luck to you

luv Rach x

Re: tainted emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:05:52 AM AEST
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Touching write however Even the bravest Eagle will soar. Thanks for sharing

Whisper

Re: tainted emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:11:41 PM AEST
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I'm beginning to feel like a broken record here...Seems like a lot of poetry I'm reading nowadays is tales of woe...Past loves...never to be replaced...From the sounds of it, it would be a GOOD thing if there isn't another Rachel...!!! She clearly wasn't the one for you...Hang tight, and you'll find someone worthy of your affection one day...Nice write.
Scorp.

Re: tainted emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:47:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful and so very touching especially the end. I really enjoyed this.
Nice write.

--amanda--

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