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Array ( [sid] => 97697 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => self expression [time] => 2005-06-11 21:07:49 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => i slice and dice
cut and scrape
to try to feel
what i do not

i put them
all together
to create
my artwork

you dont understand
my artwork
its my self expression
of hope and pain

if you were to see
the way the light
hits the blood
it would make sense

it looks so beautiful
shimmers
every which way
makes everything seem real

theres real
and make believe
when you see it
it all seems real

it takes you
from fiction
to reality
when the blood flows [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 36 [informant] => visualizing_life [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

self expression

Contributed by visualizing_life on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

i slice and dice
cut and scrape
to try to feel
what i do not

i put them
all together
to create
my artwork

you dont understand
my artwork
its my self expression
of hope and pain

if you were to see
the way the light
hits the blood
it would make sense

it looks so beautiful
shimmers
every which way
makes everything seem real

theres real
and make believe
when you see it
it all seems real

it takes you
from fiction
to reality
when the blood flows

Copyright © visualizing_life ... [ 2005-06-11 21:07:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: self expression (User Rating: 1 )
by imagenuinefake on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:23:51 PM AEST
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That's really good! ^.^
I can feel the words flow, and I can feel what the narator is going through. Very real

Re: self expression (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:49:09 PM AEST
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i liked this. it has a good flow and lots of emotion can be seen.... i just wish it weren't true. i wish everything could be all right for you. wishing you the best of luck!!

~sprints

p.s. keep up the good work

Re: self expression (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:47:46 PM AEST
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not a very healthy way to muse your work..
but I liked it just the same..
good write-

M.O.H.

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