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Array ( [sid] => 97691 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ''Cause I Cannot Find The Trust [time] => 2005-06-11 20:22:36 [hometext] => ....it only took a moment to slip away...... [bodytext] => Sitting upon a
cracked, cold
iceberg of doubt.

Trying to reason fates'
compassion for a
different map or route.

It's all in confusion
lost in some illusion
looking for me
finding you
but oh baby.....
I think we've lost us
'cause I cannot find the trust.

I lay defiled under the
decaying willow
of strength.

Dancing with patience
for a moment just
to continue at length.

It's all without any reason
always lost in the wrong season
looking for me
finding you
but oh darlin'
I think we've lost us
'cause I cannot find the trust.

And if all we've known
is simply erased
and gone.

We'll never know
where it all went
so wrong.

What's remembered is reaped
last to be sown......first to keep
looking for me
finding you
but oh baby....
I think we've lost us
'cause I cannot find the trust....
oh darlin'
I think we've lost us
'cause I cannot find the trust. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

''Cause I Cannot Find The Trust

Contributed by jaeann on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:22:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sitting upon a
cracked, cold
iceberg of doubt.

Trying to reason fates'
compassion for a
different map or route.

It's all in confusion
lost in some illusion
looking for me
finding you
but oh baby.....
I think we've lost us
'cause I cannot find the trust.

I lay defiled under the
decaying willow
of strength.

Dancing with patience
for a moment just
to continue at length.

It's all without any reason
always lost in the wrong season
looking for me
finding you
but oh darlin'
I think we've lost us
'cause I cannot find the trust.

And if all we've known
is simply erased
and gone.

We'll never know
where it all went
so wrong.

What's remembered is reaped
last to be sown......first to keep
looking for me
finding you
but oh baby....
I think we've lost us
'cause I cannot find the trust....
oh darlin'
I think we've lost us
'cause I cannot find the trust.

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2005-06-11 20:22:36]
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Re: ''Cause I Cannot Find The Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:35:18 PM AEST
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Well, Jaymee that was simply beautiful, and very understandable, but you should make that a beautiful song.....would that be good if someone could sing those words to you?
Keep 'em coming little Pear Lady......each and every day if possible.....keep you out or trouble!!!
Warm love
consue

Re: ''Cause I Cannot Find The Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 11:33:43 PM AEST
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well written ...find myself humming would make a good song

Shari

Re: ''Cause I Cannot Find The Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:26:46 PM AEST
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I agree with NoSaint..
this would make an awesome tune..
great write

M.O.H.

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