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[aid] => mick
[title] => Shattered Torn and Broken
[time] => 2005-06-11 19:50:33
[hometext] => I dont think its that good..i just need feedback on it to maybe fix it up a little...just someone elses thoughts...
[bodytext] => Her eyes covered with pure hate You cant save her, for its too late The girl so perfect and nice Frozen from the world like ice the girl so sweet Getting hit and beat The unbreakable girl finally broke Lost is all, lost all hope Locked up pain slowly slipping out Unseen feelings roam about Unleashing her dark side You better run, you better hide She takes her knife & releases the pain Wondering why everyday is the same Another day of horror, another day of hate Its just her destiny, its her fate She slowly drinks her own posion as seconds go by Tasting the sweet & sour liquid ready to die She sits there and waits broken & torn Wanting out, no longer wanting more Next think you know she passes out Without a shred of regret, not a pout Only joy and a smile on her face It was worth it even if she didnt like the taste Darkness falls apon her lifeless body Someone so great..so hard to believe Nobody would of known, nobody could of guessed.. This was her last solution..her best People look at her lifeless face As memories of her sting their minds like mace They wish to forget and live without knowing But its too late, they are to blame for her going Her shattered dreams so haunt them everynight They try to ignore it, they try to fight But it never does go away The regret and guilt tends to stay Her voice talks to them all the time As they scream and shout for her to leave their minds She laughs and giggles as they cry Driving them insane until they all died. They couldnt handle it anymore, unable to bare The images of her & her cold dark stare Silenced and dead they all became All even, equal, the same.... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => LostSoul666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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