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Array ( [sid] => 97674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My faithful light [time] => 2005-06-11 18:18:21 [hometext] => i started this song but never got the chance to finish it.. i wanna know where you think i should go from here... its the opening and the chorus... so please comment on what you think [bodytext] => (opening)wandering... out in the danger
i take a chance... with you there by my side
now its me and you... i hope we can survive this
cuz its late at night... and you are my faithful light
my faithful light

(chorus)we walk alone as we walk along
holding hands as we fade into the night
no one to save us, no one to help us
its just me and you and that is all weve got [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 34 [informant] => starry_eyed_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

My faithful light

Contributed by starry_eyed_soul on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:18:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

(opening)wandering... out in the danger
i take a chance... with you there by my side
now its me and you... i hope we can survive this
cuz its late at night... and you are my faithful light
my faithful light

(chorus)we walk alone as we walk along
holding hands as we fade into the night
no one to save us, no one to help us
its just me and you and that is all weve got

Copyright © starry_eyed_soul ... [ 2005-06-11 18:18:21]
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Re: My faithful light (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:39:10 PM AEST
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Can't wait to sing it all....
so far so good...
well done
cheers coni

Re: My faithful light (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 07:06:14 PM AEST
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i like what u got down so far, but i dont' no wat ur rythm is so idk where to go either

Re: My faithful light (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 07:15:54 PM AEST
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What you have is beautiful..

Start out slow tempo...

*****we walk alone as we walk along
holding hands as we fade into the night
no one to save us, no one to help us
its just me and you and that is all we've got

Ok so I added this.. you may have already completed the project.. but here is what came to me..

Is't this love all we need we have come so far
Both of us one added star
To the lovely heavens above
Just you and I in this love

I like this part sing it twice or even three times.. I love it

*****wandering... out in the danger
i take a chance... with you there by my side
now its me and you... i hope we can survive this
cuz its late at night... and you are my faithful light
my faithful light

I changed it somewhat..

*****Wandering out in the danger
We both take a chance side by side
Just you and me, can we survive
cuz its late at night, you are my faithful light
My faithful light..

Oh well, it was fun.. I like your write.. let me know if you did complete it.. I would love to see the finish.. your finish..

RLPoetess ; ))

Re: My faithful light (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:43:18 PM AEST
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I really like this and I think if ya add on a little more the finishing will be awesome. I'm just wondering if you've finished this. Would love to see/read the whole song.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer

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