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Array ( [sid] => 97666 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He's Only Seven [time] => 2005-06-11 15:38:27 [hometext] => For My Brother! Please comment! [bodytext] => This will probably,
Sound really sad,
But I need to get it out,
Cause its making me so mad!!

My brother Liam,
Maybe only seven,
But since the split,
He’s doing me head in!!

I punched a wall yesterday,
Two of my knuckles are broken,
But it really annoys me,
With his words that are spoken.

He said today,
“Hayley, do you know why I’m annoying?”
I said “why Liam”?
“Because I don’t feel normal at the moment”

I was really confused,
I don’t know what to do,
I don’t feel right either,
But is he telling the truth?!

He’s only seven,
But he makes me cry,
When he went home,
He didn’t even say bye!!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 6 [informant] => BuggY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

He's Only Seven

Contributed by BuggY on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 03:38:27 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

This will probably,
Sound really sad,
But I need to get it out,
Cause its making me so mad!!

My brother Liam,
Maybe only seven,
But since the split,
He’s doing me head in!!

I punched a wall yesterday,
Two of my knuckles are broken,
But it really annoys me,
With his words that are spoken.

He said today,
“Hayley, do you know why I’m annoying?”
I said “why Liam”?
“Because I don’t feel normal at the moment”

I was really confused,
I don’t know what to do,
I don’t feel right either,
But is he telling the truth?!

He’s only seven,
But he makes me cry,
When he went home,
He didn’t even say bye!!

Copyright Â© BuggY ... [ 2005-06-11 15:38:27]
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Re: He's Only Seven (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 03:53:26 PM AEST
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Hi,
buggY did you talk to either of your parents about whats going on , and how you feel? I think they could probly help alot! If you keep this problem to urself it can only get worse!!!
Concernd friend,
Jill

Re: He's Only Seven (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 07:50:49 PM AEST
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My sister's eight and she has clinical depression. At such a young age, depression can have many different symptoms. That might be why he's annoying you so much and why he's acting so different. I hope everything works out.

-Jane_Doe

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