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I miss you so bad

I wish I felt sure
I wish you could last

The time of day
Just wont move past

I wish I could fly
Off this roof, so sad

Memories prick
Inside my aching head

The food in my stomach
Would rather exit my throat instead

A beautiful day tainted red
I need comfort, I need to be held

I miss you
I miss you so bad

I wish you only knew
What you could have had

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Someone Please Hold Me

Contributed by jyssvw on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 01:55:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I miss you
I miss you so bad

I wish I felt sure
I wish you could last

The time of day
Just wont move past

I wish I could fly
Off this roof, so sad

Memories prick
Inside my aching head

The food in my stomach
Would rather exit my throat instead

A beautiful day tainted red
I need comfort, I need to be held

I miss you
I miss you so bad

I wish you only knew
What you could have had

________________________
______

Copyright © jyssvw ... [ 2005-06-11 13:55:18]
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Re: Someone Please Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:07:58 PM AEST
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this has made me think...
my mum is dieing and has a maximum of a few months to live.
... i guess i'll be thinking like this when she dies...
*sigh*
my heart goes out to you, for the hurt your trapped in now.

Re: Someone Please Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:16:10 PM AEST
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This is a good poem I like it, I have felt like that before.

Re: Someone Please Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by shortcake on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:29:15 PM AEST
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wow, great poems are hard to find but this one is one of the best

Re: Someone Please Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by starry_eyed_soul on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:46:13 PM AEST
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i could really feel the emotion and the need.... thats great writing... i have felt like this before and thats a perfect poem to describe it.. good job....
TiffanyShay

Re: Someone Please Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:52:34 PM AEST
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Great write, your emotions come across vividly , LOve this

Leia

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