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Array ( [sid] => 9762 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Council of Hobbits [time] => 2003-01-04 22:20:00 [hometext] => Third in my Two Towers series. The three speakers of this poem may not be clear on first reading, but i hope it's not too confusing. [bodytext] => Master.
Master takes care of us now.

Smeagol.
I will trust you.
You will lead us.

Stinker!

Fat Hobbit. We will eat it.
Yes, kill and eat it, my Precious.

Hopeless.

No.
You were once not much different
From a hobbit.

It must be possible to save him.

For it must be possible to save me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 13 [informant] => thorns [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

A Council of Hobbits

Contributed by thorns on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Master.
Master takes care of us now.

Smeagol.
I will trust you.
You will lead us.

Stinker!

Fat Hobbit. We will eat it.
Yes, kill and eat it, my Precious.

Hopeless.

No.
You were once not much different
From a hobbit.

It must be possible to save him.

For it must be possible to save me.

Copyright © thorns ... [ 2003-01-04 22:20:00]
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Re: A Council of Hobbits (User Rating: 1 )
by atwojay on Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 12:59:23 PM AEST
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I think I know who the speakers are. :) I love how you did this, especially the last line. That's exactly what I thought Frodo must have thought when he said it must be possible to save Gollum/Smeagol.

Re: A Council of Hobbits (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 07:00:55 AM AEST
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A chance
perhaps a glance
a fate of my own
as seen in the eyes of another

A very good read,
wordsy.

Re: A Council of Hobbits (User Rating: 1 )
by thorns on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 03:06:17 PM AEST
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ok, i get how that applies to my poem! :) thanks for the intellegent and insightful comment.

Re: A Council of Hobbits (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:31:54 AM AEST
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Dearest Thorns @-<<-
Ha! I love him too... that conversation is the best part in the whole movie!! I think Gollum is soooo cute and would keep the little fellow! (have to watch it though lol) lmao Great Write! Always Nessa can't get over it too cute!

Re: A Council of Hobbits (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 03:57:44 PM AEST
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we went to see that movie and that's really cool that you did this, and you made me laugh my ** off I think that was the funniest part of the movie! George

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