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[aid] => mick
[title] => Do you love me?
[time] => 2005-06-10 21:59:01
[hometext] => This poem is written to my grandmother, but you can apply to your own life. COMMENTS PLEASE! (yes i`m begging)
[bodytext] => Granny do you love me?
I really can`t tell.
But I know if you do,
You must hate me as well.
Everday you say you hate me
and then you wonder "why"?
I sit in my room and do nothing but cry.
My mother didn`t want me
neither did my dad
but all the things you do seem to make me so sad.
It started wither my mother
now it`s you and my father
so with my dumb life
why should i even bother?
You told me already
that you had your black dress*
and if i was to go
it wouldnt cause you any stress.
So granny do you love me
i really cant tell
and excuse me for this
But i`ll see you in hell.
*You know everybody normally wears black to funerals.
[comments] => 6
[counter] => 187
[topic] => 36
[informant] => Sad-one
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[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => Suicide
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Do you love me?
Contributed by
Sad-one
on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:59:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Granny do you love me?
I really can`t tell.
But I know if you do,
You must hate me as well.
Everday you say you hate me
and then you wonder "why"?
I sit in my room and do nothing but cry.
My mother didn`t want me
neither did my dad
but all the things you do seem to make me so sad.
It started wither my mother
now it`s you and my father
so with my dumb life
why should i even bother?
You told me already
that you had your black dress*
and if i was to go
it wouldnt cause you any stress.
So granny do you love me
i really cant tell
and excuse me for this
But i`ll see you in hell.
*You know everybody normally wears black to funerals.
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Sad-one
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2005-06-10 21:59:01]
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Re: Do you love me?
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:23:26 PM AEST
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I LOVE IT!!!!! One of my favorite poems! I especially like the last two stanzas and the last two lines are killers! This is amazing! I love it, i can't even say anything else. It's amazing.
GREAT WRITE!
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Re: Do you love me?
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 03:49:39 PM AEST
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Your honestly is absolutely amazing, and now I know how you can relate to my abusive poem! You too are surrounded by those that are so sick, sick, sick. And a young person has a fine sense of justice and simply cannot believe what it happening to them! I know you will be just fine, provided you continue to write each and every line, feel it, cry it out, and most of all don't die. You will end up being a very understanding person with much depth of feeling. This is your test, dear, and if you're unable to rescue yourself, cry no more tears, just realize, what you are going through is to mold you.....and if you understand that if won't hurt as much. Don't that if personal either. When someone is surrounded by such sick people, the only level you can afford to stay on is Pity. Pity them for their sickness, but don't let it condemn you!
And Welcome to YPDC..........You will be loved here and I know if you continue to write, you will feel better
Welcome aboard, I love your poetry
Warm hugs and warm love from one that understands it all!
lovingcritters
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Re: Do you love me?
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by jaeann on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 06:49:41 PM AEST
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| I concur with Connie.....take the advice that you get....ALL of it......even the negative....for it makes you stronger....most haters hate themselves the most....and that is all they are trying to give you.....their hatred for themselves....humans in general hate in others what they KNOW they see in themselves....you are winning just by voicing your talent.....which....by the way.....is amazing......let it be your solace dear one.....and the black dress line was absolutely perfect...just the way it was.....you don't need to explain a thing.....expressing your pain in such a vague...complex...yet simplistic style.....hmmmmmm reminds me of someone I know..... :) keep up the great work......don't ever hesitate to drop in and say "Hi".......and thank you Connie for discovering this awesome spirit.....!!!! |
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Re: Do you love me?
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 07:16:40 PM AEST
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So very sad and then we wonder what's wrong with our planet???
I don't know how old u r but this is a crying shame and I don't care who thinks different.
I was raised on luv with not much material worth as the world sees it.
Heck jus come and stay at my house and let who ever do their own thing.
Seriously it's against the law to treat minors in such a way.
People never has a right to treat another human this way and I don't care what their names are.
As far a begging for comments I don't think it's comments u r after, jus someone to help u ease the pain.
P.m. me any time u wonna.
luv, huggs, prayer, faith, hope, joy peace,
emy |
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Re: Do you love me?
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by boobiepeach on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:18:22 AM AEST
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this is so sad. great write and feel of emotion. but my god so sad.
i want to hug you and make it all go away.
nat |
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Re: Do you love me?
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:06:46 AM AEST
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| Very good. So sad...I too want to hug you! |
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