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Array ( [sid] => 97609 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Friend [time] => 2005-06-10 21:51:05 [hometext] => there is one friend left, but the others broke me too much for me to allow him to get too close. [bodytext] => Out of many guy friends,
There is only one in the end
**** left me on my own
And ****** left me all alone
Those two, I trusted along with others
Who don’t bother
To be my friend anymore
I’m beginning to feel numb and sore
My one friend, I trust him
But I have been broken
By those who have lied
And didn’t try
To help at all
As I called
They walked away
Now today
When the good one
Comes with arms
I duck past
And move quite fast
The others ruined me
Now you follow me,
Try to make me talk
You suggest a walk
But I turn from you
Others have been untrue
You could be, too
I know my life I have screwed
Please don’t pull yourself in
My life is one great sin
All other friend have left
There is not proof that you won’t theft
Me of my life also
Be like others and steal my soul
Friend, I’ve been hurt way too much
I’m someone not to trust
I love you like a bro
But you aren’t a pro
You can’t fix me
You will see
Others have tried
Others have failed
And they left me in the rain
All to my pain
They left me, you will too
This is true
You will see
I decide you and me
Can’t get too close or too tight
It is not right
If you’ll just break me like the others
Don’t even bother,
My one friend,
This is my end
My way to say goodbye
My way to die
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One Friend

Contributed by sprinter27 on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:51:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Out of many guy friends,
There is only one in the end
**** left me on my own
And ****** left me all alone
Those two, I trusted along with others
Who don’t bother
To be my friend anymore
I’m beginning to feel numb and sore
My one friend, I trust him
But I have been broken
By those who have lied
And didn’t try
To help at all
As I called
They walked away
Now today
When the good one
Comes with arms
I duck past
And move quite fast
The others ruined me
Now you follow me,
Try to make me talk
You suggest a walk
But I turn from you
Others have been untrue
You could be, too
I know my life I have screwed
Please don’t pull yourself in
My life is one great sin
All other friend have left
There is not proof that you won’t theft
Me of my life also
Be like others and steal my soul
Friend, I’ve been hurt way too much
I’m someone not to trust
I love you like a bro
But you aren’t a pro
You can’t fix me
You will see
Others have tried
Others have failed
And they left me in the rain
All to my pain
They left me, you will too
This is true
You will see
I decide you and me
Can’t get too close or too tight
It is not right
If you’ll just break me like the others
Don’t even bother,
My one friend,
This is my end
My way to say goodbye
My way to die




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Re: One Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:56:47 PM AEST
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What a sad write. I hope you do let your friend in...sometimes, they can be better than all the riches in the world. I wish you true friendship and happiness!

Carol


Re: One Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:56:56 PM AEST
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oh sprints... this is sad... youre not going to die ok? guys are so stupid trust me i know. im not sure of exactly who you are talking about in this poem but even if he doesnt keep the frendship u still got us... me ok?
jennie*


Re: One Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:29:28 PM AEST
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This is a very sad, but a very emotional poem, your feelings really came out in it well, I liked the way you portrayed all of your words, it was very good. SLipSiX.


Re: One Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:30:27 PM AEST
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dont cut urself off from other people cause it aint worth it
]kc




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