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Array ( [sid] => 97564 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Mystery of Angel Adam [time] => 2005-06-10 14:44:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There was a boy named Adam,
He couldn't really speak,
And with his weird condition
He was scrawny, kind of weak.
He sat up in his wheelchair
Moaning impatiently,
And as the other students passed
They'd laugh at his vulnerability.
The caretaker soon came for him,
Rolling him away
They paused at the basketball court
Where the two of them would play.

Adams hands held the ball
As his arms went back to shoot,
The helper then took the ball
And slammed it in the hoop.

Adam shrieked and screamed and yelled
As happy as can be,
And everyone around him
Could very easily see.

Later that day, he dropped his ice-cream cone,
And once again Adam yelled
Like taking a dog away from its bone.
Everyone saw that Adam was angry.

And rolling up in to his van
He accidently shut the door on his hand,
Tears streamed down little Adam's cheeks
As he shrieked screamed and yelled.

Adam couldn't talk to well
And his condition made him weak
But his soul had feelings
And used actions to speak.
No one ever bothered though,
To become Adam's friend.
And Adam became lonely then,
And wished his life would end.

As tears ran down poor Adam's cheeks
He shrieked and screamed and yelled
Then rolled out on to the street
As rush hour was held.

Adam wasn't normal, and this you all can tell
Not many people constantly shriek, scream and yell
But Adam was an Angel,
For every emotion he showed was pure.
His smile was genuine, no fake meaning behind it
His angry hollars were of hate and pain on the spot
And the tears that slid down his face, were tears, from his heart,
How could kids at school treat him like a disgrace?

An Angel doesn't always need to say the sweetest things
An Angel doesn't always need to wear a set of wings
An Angel is someone who has a heart of gold,
If Adam could have spoken
You would have instantly known
But God sends us mysteries
And some we must solve on our own.

I've solved the mystery of Adam,
He's an Angel, I wish others would have known. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 31 [informant] => xXcrossedXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

The Mystery of Angel Adam

Contributed by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 02:44:49 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

There was a boy named Adam,
He couldn't really speak,
And with his weird condition
He was scrawny, kind of weak.
He sat up in his wheelchair
Moaning impatiently,
And as the other students passed
They'd laugh at his vulnerability.
The caretaker soon came for him,
Rolling him away
They paused at the basketball court
Where the two of them would play.

Adams hands held the ball
As his arms went back to shoot,
The helper then took the ball
And slammed it in the hoop.

Adam shrieked and screamed and yelled
As happy as can be,
And everyone around him
Could very easily see.

Later that day, he dropped his ice-cream cone,
And once again Adam yelled
Like taking a dog away from its bone.
Everyone saw that Adam was angry.

And rolling up in to his van
He accidently shut the door on his hand,
Tears streamed down little Adam's cheeks
As he shrieked screamed and yelled.

Adam couldn't talk to well
And his condition made him weak
But his soul had feelings
And used actions to speak.
No one ever bothered though,
To become Adam's friend.
And Adam became lonely then,
And wished his life would end.

As tears ran down poor Adam's cheeks
He shrieked and screamed and yelled
Then rolled out on to the street
As rush hour was held.

Adam wasn't normal, and this you all can tell
Not many people constantly shriek, scream and yell
But Adam was an Angel,
For every emotion he showed was pure.
His smile was genuine, no fake meaning behind it
His angry hollars were of hate and pain on the spot
And the tears that slid down his face, were tears, from his heart,
How could kids at school treat him like a disgrace?

An Angel doesn't always need to say the sweetest things
An Angel doesn't always need to wear a set of wings
An Angel is someone who has a heart of gold,
If Adam could have spoken
You would have instantly known
But God sends us mysteries
And some we must solve on our own.

I've solved the mystery of Adam,
He's an Angel, I wish others would have known.

Copyright © xXcrossedXx ... [ 2005-06-10 14:44:49]
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Re: The Mystery of Angel Adam (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:00:37 PM AEST
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a lot of this i liked, you had nice rhyme and rhythmn, and concept woven in. your ending was excellent. some of this i would have cut down, as to make more powerful, but its fine as it is.

Re: The Mystery of Angel Adam (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 11:55:00 AM AEST
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I have nothing to say about this poem other than the fact that I thought it was good, and not enough people have read it. Something I've seen first hand too, so it's relatable at the same time(i guess i did have something to say about it..lol). Be proud of this one.

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