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Array ( [sid] => 9756 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Hear My Plea! [time] => 2003-01-04 20:20:00 [hometext] => Written for my brother who owes my husband & I money,& he has'nt given it to us yet,he just forgets about us,& worries only about himself! [bodytext] => I can't stand the fact of getting lied to,
you act like you don't care,
If only you know the wrong you do,
It's just no really fare!

You know I'm hurting,you see the pain,
but you just walk away.
instead you keep lying invain,
how can you be this way?

Your suppose to my brother,you know,
family through thick & thin,
why can't you help us out Bro,
open your heart & let me in!

We try to help you when you needed it,
why can't you remember that day?
we were there for you don't forget,
Don't you have something to say?

Your so caught up in yourself,it's sad,
and you don't listen to us at all,
Can't you think back what we once had,
Or even give us a call,

I love you, your the only brother I've got,
Why do you treat me this way?
It's not like when we were just little tots,
we'd fight,and than go run & play,

Were adults here can't you try to be,
all I'm asking is for you to come through,
Why can't you hear my plea?
Your little sister loves you!


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Hear My Plea!

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I can't stand the fact of getting lied to,
you act like you don't care,
If only you know the wrong you do,
It's just no really fare!

You know I'm hurting,you see the pain,
but you just walk away.
instead you keep lying invain,
how can you be this way?

Your suppose to my brother,you know,
family through thick & thin,
why can't you help us out Bro,
open your heart & let me in!

We try to help you when you needed it,
why can't you remember that day?
we were there for you don't forget,
Don't you have something to say?

Your so caught up in yourself,it's sad,
and you don't listen to us at all,
Can't you think back what we once had,
Or even give us a call,

I love you, your the only brother I've got,
Why do you treat me this way?
It's not like when we were just little tots,
we'd fight,and than go run & play,

Were adults here can't you try to be,
all I'm asking is for you to come through,
Why can't you hear my plea?
Your little sister loves you!






Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2003-01-04 20:20:00]
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Re: Hear My Plea! (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 08:30:37 PM AEST
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Aww Christina i hope your brother comes through and realizes what he's done....this is so sad i wish i could help in some way....*hugs*..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Hear My Plea! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 08:53:30 PM AEST
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Christina, this is such a sad plea...one I hope he reads and heeds.....
Your friend, Jenni


Re: Hear My Plea! (User Rating: 1 )
by nomad on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 03:50:40 PM AEST
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A sad poem, Christina. I hope your brother finally heard you. My brothers and sisters, and parents, are all gone.




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