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Array ( [sid] => 97556 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drop of Blood [time] => 2005-06-10 12:38:41 [hometext] => ... plz comment! thanx....... ~jennie* [bodytext] => there's nothing like a drop of blood
so perfect in form and size
a round drop of red that drips from my arm
from my mouth and from my eyes
there's nothing like a drop of blood
a form of suffering and pain
let them collect around my feet
let them fall down my cheeks like rain
there's nothing like a drop of blood
a memoir of all i have done wrong
so small could end my pain and life
clog the cut... too late... im gone
there's nothing like a drop of blood
falling from my sliced up arm
there's nothing like a drop of blood
a red stained spot of harm [comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 13 [informant] => blue_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Drop of Blood

Contributed by blue_angel on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:38:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

there's nothing like a drop of blood
so perfect in form and size
a round drop of red that drips from my arm
from my mouth and from my eyes
there's nothing like a drop of blood
a form of suffering and pain
let them collect around my feet
let them fall down my cheeks like rain
there's nothing like a drop of blood
a memoir of all i have done wrong
so small could end my pain and life
clog the cut... too late... im gone
there's nothing like a drop of blood
falling from my sliced up arm
there's nothing like a drop of blood
a red stained spot of harm

Copyright © blue_angel ... [ 2005-06-10 12:38:41]
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Re: Drop of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:44:19 PM AEST
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dont go cutting urself over our ***** fight its not at all important in the scheme of things and although u could prob care less right now wether i was alive, i want u to live
kc

Re: Drop of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by PainfulSpirit06 on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:49:31 PM AEST
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Please don't go cut yourself. Whatever the problem is, it isn't worth harming yourself. I have been there, and lately wish I could get there and actually do the deed. But I can't get myself there, so don't you go there either. Other than words of advice, great poem. Well written.

Re: Drop of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:41:11 PM AEST
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Jennie. Do not think in terms of all you have done wrong. You do so much right, that outweighs any deficiencies (hey, we all have them). I don't want to make lite of what happened between you and kc, but you don't need to cut over this. You two are good friends, I can see that. Don't let lil' things get you down. You have vacation coming up, sort things out there. I know you are sad that the school year is ending, but I know you can connect with others. Let them see how great you are on summer vacation, too!

Re: Drop of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:24:48 PM AEST
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good poem, jennie. but plz don't cut yourself! and ehh... what happened between you and kc? jaycee says that the 3 of us are close friends, but how is that if i don't know what's going on with you two?!? hmmm.... you drop the knife and give it to me. i'll either do harm to myself or throw the damned knife at.... into the swamps across from my house. we have plenty of them to through knives in! plz, jennie, don't inflict pain on yourself. i feel like a terrible friend because i can't stop it. damn me!! plz, jennie, don't do it!

your concerned and best friend til the end (my end NOT yours),

~sprints

p.s. good write

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