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Array ( [sid] => 97484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fantasy World [time] => 2005-06-09 21:11:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Verse 1
Living in my own little world
dreaming about the good life
I go in my own little world
when I feel a lot of strife

Chorus
Living in my fantasy
can't deal with my reality
hurts too much to leave my world
where I can dream of my perfect girl

Verse 2
There I feel important
like people actually care
when I'm in my real life
I'm invisible, like air

Chorus
Living in my fantasy
can't deal with my reality
hurts too much to leave my world
where I can dream of my perfect girl

Verse 3
In my fantasy
I fight who opposes me
just like an action game
Don't ever have to take the blame
(ECHO) Take the blame

Chorus
Living in my fantasy
can't deal with my reality
hurts too much to leave my world
where I can dream of my perfect girl

Bridge
Fantasies aren't always good
in fact maybe they should
be banished from my mind
until the end of time
(ECHO) End of time

But this fantasy of mine
is my sanctuary
I hate my life outside my mind
I get tired and weary
of getting hated
pressured
or blamed
this is my sanctuary
this fantasy of mine
is how I carry
on with my life
this fantasy
this fantasy
this fantasy
Fantasy world [comments] => 4 [counter] => 511 [topic] => 34 [informant] => dark_angel_of_poetry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Fantasy World

Contributed by dark_angel_of_poetry on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 09:11:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Verse 1
Living in my own little world
dreaming about the good life
I go in my own little world
when I feel a lot of strife

Chorus
Living in my fantasy
can't deal with my reality
hurts too much to leave my world
where I can dream of my perfect girl

Verse 2
There I feel important
like people actually care
when I'm in my real life
I'm invisible, like air

Chorus
Living in my fantasy
can't deal with my reality
hurts too much to leave my world
where I can dream of my perfect girl

Verse 3
In my fantasy
I fight who opposes me
just like an action game
Don't ever have to take the blame
(ECHO) Take the blame

Chorus
Living in my fantasy
can't deal with my reality
hurts too much to leave my world
where I can dream of my perfect girl

Bridge
Fantasies aren't always good
in fact maybe they should
be banished from my mind
until the end of time
(ECHO) End of time

But this fantasy of mine
is my sanctuary
I hate my life outside my mind
I get tired and weary
of getting hated
pressured
or blamed
this is my sanctuary
this fantasy of mine
is how I carry
on with my life
this fantasy
this fantasy
this fantasy
Fantasy world




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Re: Fantasy World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 01:46:35 PM AEST
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i love this poem...really it's awesome. it's just...amazing, and everyone can relate. i especially like this part
"Living in my fantasy
can't deal with my reality"
great write

- Beth -


Re: Fantasy World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 03:18:00 PM AEST
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a very different piece and I enjoyed it! well done look forward to reading more great work from you!


Re: Fantasy World (User Rating: 1 )
by fearlessleader7 on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:59:06 AM AEST
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You captured the feelings so well! Very nice imagery.

Great job!


Re: Fantasy World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 05:40:17 PM AEST
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"YOu're reality's a fnatasy, but your fantasy is killing me" -Boom Boom Satalites

Loved this, made me think of the above song, one of my favorites. Nicly done my friend!




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