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Without a ''You''
Contributed by
spazz911
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:48:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I feel the pain
I know the burn
Of being brushed off
With every turn
No matter what happens
or what the future holds
it doesn’t hold hope
or faith in its glue
If I could care
I would end up alone
But not that that matters
I’m alone in this world of two
Fourteen long, lonely, years
Almost fifteen to make it a tear
I have seen it happen
Over and over again
I really should have learned
One fact in this world
I’m not good enough for anything
Nothing comes true
I may wish and hope and scheme
But nobody cares
Wait and pray and dream
But my forte holds true
I will always be without a you
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spazz911
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2005-06-09 20:48:20]
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Re: Without a ''You''
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by english-pea-pelter on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:09:56 PM AEST
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i love this poem. it understands and expresses alot of emotion. this is a great write. i see you are pretty young for someone here.. and the scary thing is... i am too! so i think i'll check out some of your work. i encourage you to see my work, and comment please. keep up the good work,
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Re: Without a ''You''
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:46:49 PM AEST
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dont say no one cares... i do! but of course u dont notice that do u... well i do. i kno how it feels to feel alone... ive been dumped b4 u kno how that makes u feel? so unwanted... unloved... yea its almost worse than never even having a bf...
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Re: Without a ''You''
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by Jaycee on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:53:33 PM AEST
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Hi KC. Have to comment on this. You may not like the comments, but, well, that's what this little comment box is for:
I’m not good enough for anything
I think the opposite. I posted a comment on jennie's blog that addresses the kind of gal you are (you are a dee in 1977 eastern mass vernacular). It's the best praise I can give you. Even if you weren't as capable as you obviously are (and don't deny it, because denying it does not change the truth of my statement!!!), everyone has value.
But nobody cares
That's a very general statement. If it addresses romantic entanglements, well, that stuff is hard to make happen. Don't be dismayed by what you see around you. How many romances in high school ever last beyond... not that many! Consider quality, not quantity. If a dateless wonder like me can find someone, anyone can. I guarantee you that you will find someone a lot quicker than I did (if not, I'll fix you uo with my kid, but you're too good for him!!!) KC, please don't focus on the negative. See your strengths, your accomplishments.
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Re: Without a ''You''
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by lil_noel09 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 11:22:47 PM AEST
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| oh my gosh! i really love this poem! I have related to it on many levels. Don't give up hope! very nice write! :D |
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