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Array ( [sid] => 97440 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Blind Mans Tears [time] => 2005-06-09 16:03:03 [hometext] => Touching... [bodytext] => He was blind,
He was dying,
He was sad,
He cryed,
Nothing came out,
My life is his tear,
Blank, sad.
Im crying,
Not dying,
Im sad,
In the pain of love,
Im caught in its spell,
That can not be undone.
The blind man cryed,
As he died,
His tears were blank,
His tears were faded,
Blurry, distorted,
My life is his cying,
Now I have a,
Knife in my hands,
And now I'm dying...

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The Blind Mans Tears

Contributed by FigurelessShadow on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:03:03 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

He was blind,
He was dying,
He was sad,
He cryed,
Nothing came out,
My life is his tear,
Blank, sad.
Im crying,
Not dying,
Im sad,
In the pain of love,
Im caught in its spell,
That can not be undone.
The blind man cryed,
As he died,
His tears were blank,
His tears were faded,
Blurry, distorted,
My life is his cying,
Now I have a,
Knife in my hands,
And now I'm dying...

Copyright © FigurelessShadow ... [ 2005-06-09 16:03:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Blind Mans Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:06:16 PM AEST
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WOW!!!!!!! This is a great poem.. The feelings and how you where able to use both you and the blind man in this one is awsome. Keep up the great works...

MaJ

Re: The Blind Mans Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:09:12 PM AEST
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i like how you created a conection between the blind man and yourself.

"My life is his tear,
Blank, sad"

good job!

Re: The Blind Mans Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:54:32 PM AEST
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caught in a spell that cant be undone haunting a terrific write
Michelle

Re: The Blind Mans Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:25:08 PM AEST
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Great job! Really good expression in this.
Scorp.

Re: The Blind Mans Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:40:55 AM AEST
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Very, very well expressed piece!! the energy between you and the old man was so entangled and powerful!! My hat goes off to your creativity! dw

Re: The Blind Mans Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by nic on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:15:18 AM AEST
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wow... you should be proud of this. you really have a talent for getting a feeling across!

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