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Array ( [sid] => 97426 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Prayer [time] => 2005-06-09 14:02:57 [hometext] => my prayer [bodytext] => dear god...
are you listening?? do you remember me??do you remember my stories? my sadness? my pain? my triumphs? my acheivements? god please help me. help me see the good things in life. help me fogive people for thier wrong doings when it seems so hard to do... please help me love the people around me... please take me from this dak place and help me rise above... please take this pain and turn it inside out... take everything from the inside and throw it away... you said you would always be there.. and at times i thought you weren''t but now i know that you were you just had to let me learn on my own... you had to let me trudge the path my self instead of carrying me... at times i lost my faith and i strayed from the path but i need you... it didn''t take me a miracle to realize this.. all it took is one simple subject....family!! please help me to do things right
at times i felt so faithless so empty inside... hollow like i am searching for something i will never discover... please help me to make the best of my life.. help me to be a better person... please help my mom in her time of need... in her time of confusion.. i know that some how she loved me... i know that some how she really did care... please help her realize how much she needs us.. help her to become a better person if not for me then for herself... i know she doesn''t deserve my prayer but i send it to her any way... i hope she gets her life straight... dear god... please help my friends in any way possible... i love them and only want good things for them... god help my dad... i love him so much... i need him to realize how much i love him... i need him to realize how much he means to me.. i need him so much.. he is my only hope... if he died today i would die everything of me would go with him... he is all of me... if he wasn''t here i would be lost... god please help my step mom... i need her to know how much i need her... i need her to know how much i appreciate everything she has done for me... i know sometimes i make it seem like i don''t need her but i do.. its all a facade... i can''t live with out her... god help my siblings...with so much energy and spunk...i love them they are my heart.. i love them and cannot and will not live with out them... please take care of my brother... he was sent to you so many years ago... my little guardian angel.. i need to know he is ok.. i love him and miss him alot... god please watch over my family.. my very reason for living... please help them and guide them and let them not lose their way.. should they lose their way please know they will always find their way home... after all home is where the heart is... always tina...

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Prayer

Contributed by eternityandaday4u on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 02:02:57 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



dear god...
are you listening?? do you remember me??do you remember my stories? my sadness? my pain? my triumphs? my acheivements? god please help me. help me see the good things in life. help me fogive people for thier wrong doings when it seems so hard to do... please help me love the people around me... please take me from this dak place and help me rise above... please take this pain and turn it inside out... take everything from the inside and throw it away... you said you would always be there.. and at times i thought you weren''t but now i know that you were you just had to let me learn on my own... you had to let me trudge the path my self instead of carrying me... at times i lost my faith and i strayed from the path but i need you... it didn''t take me a miracle to realize this.. all it took is one simple subject....family!! please help me to do things right
at times i felt so faithless so empty inside... hollow like i am searching for something i will never discover... please help me to make the best of my life.. help me to be a better person... please help my mom in her time of need... in her time of confusion.. i know that some how she loved me... i know that some how she really did care... please help her realize how much she needs us.. help her to become a better person if not for me then for herself... i know she doesn''t deserve my prayer but i send it to her any way... i hope she gets her life straight... dear god... please help my friends in any way possible... i love them and only want good things for them... god help my dad... i love him so much... i need him to realize how much i love him... i need him to realize how much he means to me.. i need him so much.. he is my only hope... if he died today i would die everything of me would go with him... he is all of me... if he wasn''t here i would be lost... god please help my step mom... i need her to know how much i need her... i need her to know how much i appreciate everything she has done for me... i know sometimes i make it seem like i don''t need her but i do.. its all a facade... i can''t live with out her... god help my siblings...with so much energy and spunk...i love them they are my heart.. i love them and cannot and will not live with out them... please take care of my brother... he was sent to you so many years ago... my little guardian angel.. i need to know he is ok.. i love him and miss him alot... god please watch over my family.. my very reason for living... please help them and guide them and let them not lose their way.. should they lose their way please know they will always find their way home... after all home is where the heart is... always tina...





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Re: Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:52:06 PM AEST
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i think this is an extremly brave move- to share your prayer with the world. Your prayer was beautiful and know that has already planned your way. I really hope you "see the light" soon and wish you the best in your journey. Your prayer was beautiful, thank you so much for sharing. *God Bless*


Re: Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:49:41 AM AEST
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cool poem




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