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Array ( [sid] => 97423 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Warped [time] => 2005-06-09 12:33:54 [hometext] => Don't understand it myself....lol [bodytext] => Black is to white
what amity is to spite

Love and emotion
enter with commotion

Disdain and hate
earmarks of change and fate

Frustration and sorrow
tell tales of tomorrow

Pent up; bursting inside
blocking the path is pride

Freedom is to chains
what fulfillment is to abstain

An anxious soul
on foot patrol

Scanning the scene
for something pristine

To sever a tie
not the easiest to apply

You to salvation
like idea to innovation

A hawk to a mouse
like a fox to henhouse

How do these jumbled thoughts agree?
Well, we shall just wait and see... [comments] => 8 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 73 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Warped

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:33:54 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Black is to white
what amity is to spite

Love and emotion
enter with commotion

Disdain and hate
earmarks of change and fate

Frustration and sorrow
tell tales of tomorrow

Pent up; bursting inside
blocking the path is pride

Freedom is to chains
what fulfillment is to abstain

An anxious soul
on foot patrol

Scanning the scene
for something pristine

To sever a tie
not the easiest to apply

You to salvation
like idea to innovation

A hawk to a mouse
like a fox to henhouse

How do these jumbled thoughts agree?
Well, we shall just wait and see...

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-06-09 12:33:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Warped (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:42:50 PM AEST
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mabey the point is that they dont agree..lol...

nice write scorp

Re: Warped (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:30:31 PM AEST
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This was a very good poem, I liked all of the examples you used in it, um, it actually sounds like the game of life, the game you never win. SLipSiX.

Re: Warped (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:52:56 PM AEST
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I love playing with words and you did a great job doing so in this write! Yeah!! Great job!!!

Carol

Re: Warped (User Rating: 1 )
by toserious2 on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 01:10:00 PM AEST
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You speak Your tongue in very much of mine..........Depth,viision,speculation and wonder.I adore it..I like to chat with you on thi s very weekend..Plz,join me on "toserious2@yahoo.com"

Re: Warped (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 08:53:49 PM AEST
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scorp, your originiality and talent is what you can always rely on when you write, it after all is why i love to come visit your account page =]

Re: Warped (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 12:05:03 PM AEST
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Frustration and sorrow tell tales of tomorrow Or yesterday! Quite the puzzle you have built here. Me likes. *wonders how I missed this one* But I look at the date and I was going through some ***** back then. On to see what else I may have missed.

Re: Warped (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 30th August 2020 @ 10:06:27 PM AEST
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Love it Scorp.......
My kinda poem......
Missing you....

Re: Warped (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 18th January 2021 @ 11:24:38 AM AEST
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Still digging this!!
Pretty slick too.

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