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Array ( [sid] => 97352 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Obsessive Compulsive [time] => 2005-06-08 20:46:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => breathing and thinking
and caring too much
try to fight it all off
thinking of every touch

soaring in moments
wanting so much more
than what I have here
here is so little, there is not near

because here is nothing
I take what i got
and hold it all dear
can't take it all away

no one touch my stuff
its mine its all here
and if you take it i'll scream
and pound and scream more

if you move it i'll notice
and if its gone i will care
because all that i've got
so little and bare

i want to live life
with freedom and bliss
and learn to let go
to all that I miss

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 25 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Obsessive Compulsive

Contributed by spazz911 on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:46:51 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

breathing and thinking
and caring too much
try to fight it all off
thinking of every touch

soaring in moments
wanting so much more
than what I have here
here is so little, there is not near

because here is nothing
I take what i got
and hold it all dear
can't take it all away

no one touch my stuff
its mine its all here
and if you take it i'll scream
and pound and scream more

if you move it i'll notice
and if its gone i will care
because all that i've got
so little and bare

i want to live life
with freedom and bliss
and learn to let go
to all that I miss

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-06-08 20:46:51]
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Re: Obsessive Compulsive (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:50:20 PM AEST
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i know EXACTLY how you feel. man it was like you wrote the poem from my head...excellent write

~Vermillion~

Re: Obsessive Compulsive (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:16:56 PM AEST
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Good poem, KC. An interesting insight into an interesting gal. You're the only one who can let go. I know, 'cause I've been there. I remember many years ago cataloging everything in my head. And if something was moved half an inch, I made a big stick about it. For me, materialism was a replacement (and not a good one) for what I didn't have. Now, I am not saying that is true in your case, but I'd rather you own stuff rather than stuff owning you.

Re: Obsessive Compulsive (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:34:15 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing this...The Title caught my eyes cuz I have a sister like this..and I must admit..I used to be a little like this some time ago....
Good write
Jenni

Re: Obsessive Compulsive (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:41:26 PM AEST
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thats rilly good kc... rilly good. i dunno what else to say... but i know just how u feel...
jennie*

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