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Array ( [sid] => 9735 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => now that you're gone (love story pt. 3) [time] => 2003-01-04 12:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i remember you pressed our lips on me once
emphasis on once.
(you couldnt kiss my lips)
never again did your lips come near me again
so why do i still think of you?
when all i have left are open wounds left by you
wounds that will never heal.

two weeks of love by two weak individuals
leaves two years of pain on me

its nighttime.
and as i listen to the record
the one you never gave me
i feel the all too familiar trickle of blood
do you even understand
what made me turn my face away

as i fall silent...
i hear your voice say "goodbye my precious martyr"
and i hear myself say "goodnight. ill always love you"

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now that you're gone (love story pt. 3)

Contributed by fallensilence on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

i remember you pressed our lips on me once
emphasis on once.
(you couldnt kiss my lips)
never again did your lips come near me again
so why do i still think of you?
when all i have left are open wounds left by you
wounds that will never heal.

two weeks of love by two weak individuals
leaves two years of pain on me

its nighttime.
and as i listen to the record
the one you never gave me
i feel the all too familiar trickle of blood
do you even understand
what made me turn my face away

as i fall silent...
i hear your voice say "goodbye my precious martyr"
and i hear myself say "goodnight. ill always love you"

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-01-04 12:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: now that you're gone (love story pt. 3) (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensilence on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 04:31:45 PM AEST
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"people just sort of stop caring"
these last 3 poems i posted were very special to me and im glad some people read them even if it was just a few. thanks to those who read them. the poems are about my first love, and that is why they are so special to me.

Re: now that you're gone (love story pt. 3) (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 08:14:54 PM AEST
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True love never stops caring and it never walks away to leave your side......This reminds me of a 2 year relationship i had that tore me up inside and out, i hope your not going to do anything harmful to yourself my friend......i am here if you need to talk..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: now that you're gone (love story pt. 3) (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:01:17 AM AEST
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wow, i just read these three poems - you're so talented! you find the balance between the tragically beautiful and the deeply moving - i hope you find your true love, i hope we all do. keep writing, Kate xxx

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