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Array ( [sid] => 97345 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Heart Is Mine [time] => 2005-06-08 19:57:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You say,
Im the one that makes you tick
And well you’re the one that makes me sick
So right now,
I don’t need your politics
Your head tricks
And your antics
But how,
So do need I
A slap in the face to get stuff right
Sort it out, take my time
Make every sentence have a rhyme
Sort it out, take control
Drive the line and pay the toll
Till I relived how,
You complete me now,
think till I start,
you’re the key to my heart,
My heart
We aint smart
And we don’t know nuttin
But how,
Just is are life cuttin
So I took control and paid the toll
And I took the time to make it rhyme
There isn’t much 'ado' now
But maybe sit and wonder how
Death will become of us
When the wounds will fill with puss
And you’ll think that’s really creepy
But right now im gettin really sleepy
So I think im just gonna go
And I just thought I’d let you know
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 458 [topic] => 7 [informant] => suesan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

This Heart Is Mine

Contributed by suesan on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 07:57:49 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

You say,
Im the one that makes you tick
And well you’re the one that makes me sick
So right now,
I don’t need your politics
Your head tricks
And your antics
But how,
So do need I
A slap in the face to get stuff right
Sort it out, take my time
Make every sentence have a rhyme
Sort it out, take control
Drive the line and pay the toll
Till I relived how,
You complete me now,
think till I start,
you’re the key to my heart,
My heart
We aint smart
And we don’t know nuttin
But how,
Just is are life cuttin
So I took control and paid the toll
And I took the time to make it rhyme
There isn’t much 'ado' now
But maybe sit and wonder how
Death will become of us
When the wounds will fill with puss
And you’ll think that’s really creepy
But right now im gettin really sleepy
So I think im just gonna go
And I just thought I’d let you know

Copyright Â© suesan ... [ 2005-06-08 19:57:49]
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Re: This Heart Is Mine (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:34:08 PM AEST
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i liked this poem
it was fun to read and interesting :D
~kortnie

Re: This Heart Is Mine (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 04:16:48 PM AEST
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this poem was great. i enjoyed reading this.
well done.

Re: This Heart Is Mine (User Rating: 1 )
by princess_of_pain on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 10:29:47 PM AEST
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fun poem, i liked it a lot

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