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Array ( [sid] => 97341 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i try [time] => 2005-06-08 18:46:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => try so hard to make it stop
the feelings for you i have inside
but its so strong it hurts to say
the i shall love you in this way

when i see you
you make me smile
when i feel you
it makes me cry

for you inside i cannot bear
i need you so much
i need you here
so i can make my feelings clear

i hate it when we do not talk
or hug
or be friends
or when you are not near

i wish these feelings would go away
so for ever in my heart you can stay

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 332 [topic] => 75 [informant] => angel_eyez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

i try

Contributed by angel_eyez on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

try so hard to make it stop
the feelings for you i have inside
but its so strong it hurts to say
the i shall love you in this way

when i see you
you make me smile
when i feel you
it makes me cry

for you inside i cannot bear
i need you so much
i need you here
so i can make my feelings clear

i hate it when we do not talk
or hug
or be friends
or when you are not near

i wish these feelings would go away
so for ever in my heart you can stay

Copyright © angel_eyez ... [ 2005-06-08 18:46:12]
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Re: i try (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:15:20 PM AEST
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Angel_eyez

Sorry I somewhat know how you feel.
I had my first love walk out on me.
After ten years married and children involved she left.
I was heart broken and never have I gotten intirely over her.

Sinned

Re: i try (User Rating: 1 )
by c2b6s on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:21:38 PM AEST
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This poem is so true to life. Once in a while you meet a person and no matter what they do to you, you will always love them more than anything. Sometimes I think it would be easier if we could just shut off our hearts. But good poem and i know exactly how you feel.

Re: i try (User Rating: 1 )
by expired_promises on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:11:51 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed your poem, sometimes you love someone so much it hurts and it's hard to realize that anything they do is actually hurting you

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