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Even after the pain you've put me through
I thought I could stand on my own
But when I see you, I crumbled again
How do you do what you do to me..
When I don't feel you anymore?
How can you still be in my veins..
When you've been gone for so damn long?
Either way, I have to stand strong
I can't let you see me get weak
When your hand brushes mine
For the first time in three months
But I can't help it when you look at me
Pain is all you'll see
Ripping through my veins
Like fire when it rains...
My tears will show you what you do to me
When you look my way
You break my heart all over again
And all my hard work is worthless......
.......just like me....... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 22 [informant] => UrAllEyeAm1205 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Look What You Do

Contributed by UrAllEyeAm1205 on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:32:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You seem to make me weak
Even after the pain you've put me through
I thought I could stand on my own
But when I see you, I crumbled again
How do you do what you do to me..
When I don't feel you anymore?
How can you still be in my veins..
When you've been gone for so damn long?
Either way, I have to stand strong
I can't let you see me get weak
When your hand brushes mine
For the first time in three months
But I can't help it when you look at me
Pain is all you'll see
Ripping through my veins
Like fire when it rains...
My tears will show you what you do to me
When you look my way
You break my heart all over again
And all my hard work is worthless......
.......just like me.......

Copyright © UrAllEyeAm1205 ... [ 2005-06-08 18:32:29]
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Re: Look What You Do (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:24:52 PM AEST
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thats a very touching write. just remember that you're never worthless.but those who make you feel you are,are worthless in themselves

~Vermillion~

Re: Look What You Do (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 04:47:52 PM AEST
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very touching.

Re: Look What You Do (User Rating: 1 )
by beautiful_loser on Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 05:07:50 PM AEST
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a very touching poem, thanks for sharing...and remember that your never worthless

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