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Array ( [sid] => 9733 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => not sure you know (love story pt 1) [time] => 2003-01-04 12:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => here i am again...
in this all too familiar place
it wont be long though
before i lose this high and drown in sorrows

i wasnt sure i knew you until the other day
the other day when i was thinking of yesterday
souls so distant when we're inches apart
you can touch my skin but never my heart

i learned from your silence that all i got was pity

you can't find words to say to my face
i really must be worthless to not even get your sympathy
but i cant deny the way i feel for you
paralyzed heart wont start beating
even my lungs cant start breathing
(my emotions go unseen by you)
you have me thinking differently
a euphoric state of mind

"what did i say?" ill ask
"nothing" she tells me.

should i have not shared my heart with you?
i wish i knew the words to have you see me. to love me.

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not sure you know (love story pt 1)

Contributed by fallensilence on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

here i am again...
in this all too familiar place
it wont be long though
before i lose this high and drown in sorrows

i wasnt sure i knew you until the other day
the other day when i was thinking of yesterday
souls so distant when we're inches apart
you can touch my skin but never my heart

i learned from your silence that all i got was pity

you can't find words to say to my face
i really must be worthless to not even get your sympathy
but i cant deny the way i feel for you
paralyzed heart wont start beating
even my lungs cant start breathing
(my emotions go unseen by you)
you have me thinking differently
a euphoric state of mind

"what did i say?" ill ask
"nothing" she tells me.

should i have not shared my heart with you?
i wish i knew the words to have you see me. to love me.

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-01-04 12:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: not sure you know (love story pt 1) (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:55:24 PM AEST
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Oh how sad this is, i am going to have to read the sequal's to this one, this one brought tears to my eyes....especially the last lines where it says i wish i knew the words to have you see me. to love me.........*grabs my tissues and goes to the next write*....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: not sure you know (love story pt 1) (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 06:25:29 PM AEST
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so sad, but worth every word you brought together! great poem!!!!

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