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Array ( [sid] => 97314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Green Angel [time] => 2005-06-08 15:02:21 [hometext] => This poem is based on the book *Green Angel* by Alice Hoffman. Read it. Then you'll understand. [bodytext] => Green Angel- Elle.Yates

This sickness growing inside of me
With these embers burning my eyes
I can no longer see
My blurry vision
I hope it can still guide me

My moonlight
Turned to shadows
And theres nothing I can do
Of my garden.

My sewn thorns
and the nails in my boots.
I won't take anything.

The way things have gotten,
So terrible.
Im at the edge of nowhere
With nothing
And I'll stay there.

I want to think,
I want to feel
Like someone is watching me
That someone is there
But I'm alone.

Who I am
Is not who I once was,
Not who I want to be,
But what I've become.

Then you came along,
My diamond
You never showed yourself
Until the end
But you were so beautiful.

With you around
I changed again
Back to me
Back into Green.

Copyright ©2005 [comments] => 1 [counter] => 448 [topic] => 43 [informant] => IceQueenElle13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Green Angel

Contributed by IceQueenElle13 on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 03:02:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Green Angel- Elle.Yates

This sickness growing inside of me
With these embers burning my eyes
I can no longer see
My blurry vision
I hope it can still guide me

My moonlight
Turned to shadows
And theres nothing I can do
Of my garden.

My sewn thorns
and the nails in my boots.
I won't take anything.

The way things have gotten,
So terrible.
Im at the edge of nowhere
With nothing
And I'll stay there.

I want to think,
I want to feel
Like someone is watching me
That someone is there
But I'm alone.

Who I am
Is not who I once was,
Not who I want to be,
But what I've become.

Then you came along,
My diamond
You never showed yourself
Until the end
But you were so beautiful.

With you around
I changed again
Back to me
Back into Green.

Copyright ©2005

Copyright Â© IceQueenElle13 ... [ 2005-06-08 15:02:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Green Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 04:38:46 PM AEST
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nicely done!
i liked it much.

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