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Array ( [sid] => 97298 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the Story of My Life [time] => 2005-06-08 11:29:45 [hometext] => blame it all on me [bodytext] => Load me up with medication
Feel my heartbeat.
In the game of life,
I lost with defeat.
I can't go on, I'm shutting down
Caught in the ocean,
I might as well drown.
I cause frusteration, hate.
Just blame everything on Kate.
Bursting within my mind,
Searching for the love thats so hard to find.
Confusion distorts me,
Love creeps so silently.
Not telling me its around,
Only showing when I'm lying dead on the ground.

Kate Ecklund [comments] => 4 [counter] => 277 [topic] => 36 [informant] => suicidal_imbecile [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

the Story of My Life

Contributed by suicidal_imbecile on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 11:29:45 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Load me up with medication
Feel my heartbeat.
In the game of life,
I lost with defeat.
I can't go on, I'm shutting down
Caught in the ocean,
I might as well drown.
I cause frusteration, hate.
Just blame everything on Kate.
Bursting within my mind,
Searching for the love thats so hard to find.
Confusion distorts me,
Love creeps so silently.
Not telling me its around,
Only showing when I'm lying dead on the ground.

Kate Ecklund

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Re: the Story of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by FigurelessShadow on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 11:45:56 AM AEST
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wow, deep. I kinda feel the same way, but not in such a deep way. Ur writing is good. It's true. That gave me an inspiration

Re: the Story of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 02:33:37 PM AEST
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Heavy stuff. Good write; strong emotions. Hang tight, things will get better...If you ever want someone to talk to, feel free to pm me.
Take Care...
Scorp.

Re: the Story of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:49:21 AM AEST
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Nice write I can definitely relate to the first
line some people think the more juiced up on
meds you are the better you should feel.
Unfortunately, that is rarely the case. I think
you are to hard on yourself in this poem you
can't blame everything on you and I highly
doubt you cause hate. Still a good poem
about emotions that shouldn't be kept inside.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: the Story of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:55:24 AM AEST
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Kate this is such a strong write and it has so much pain and emotion in it. I’ve been gone for a few days and almost forgot how much I like to read your work. Sorry you have to feel these things but know your not the only one that does. Take care and keep your head up things are going to get better. I to wish I could find a love and have happiness with them. Life is hard and sometimes it feels like we got dealt the *****ty hand. Take care and know your in my thoughts. You seem like such a awesome girl and I’m lucky to get to talk to you and read your work. Later for now Kate….Steve

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