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Array ( [sid] => 97294 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Soul Death [time] => 2005-06-08 10:37:17 [hometext] => Please comment [bodytext] => She feels so misunderstood, so hurt, and so confused
But the pain u 2 have caused this one is greater
Than the bearing of my soul
How do hearts turn cold?
How do truths become lies?
The deceitfulness that runs deeper,
than the detection of eyes
Inconsiderateness, and all that other jazz
U 2 have chewed up my soul, and spit it out in the past
So much pain from two who "care"
if that is what love and caring is
I'll be better off not going there
Not the only one who encompassed, the feeling of
mistrust and abuse
Plus the realizatin of supposed to be devoted
Yes I am confused too
The sisterhood broken down tremendously,
Her soulmate was by her side
Yet no consideration for the "mother"
Who was doubtful, yet thought all was fine
Now the grim reaper has my soul
And you too have each other's
Continue to hold the other's half heart
The dark angel has my other [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 48 [informant] => PainfulSpirit06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Soul Death

Contributed by PainfulSpirit06 on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:37:17 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

She feels so misunderstood, so hurt, and so confused
But the pain u 2 have caused this one is greater
Than the bearing of my soul
How do hearts turn cold?
How do truths become lies?
The deceitfulness that runs deeper,
than the detection of eyes
Inconsiderateness, and all that other jazz
U 2 have chewed up my soul, and spit it out in the past
So much pain from two who "care"
if that is what love and caring is
I'll be better off not going there
Not the only one who encompassed, the feeling of
mistrust and abuse
Plus the realizatin of supposed to be devoted
Yes I am confused too
The sisterhood broken down tremendously,
Her soulmate was by her side
Yet no consideration for the "mother"
Who was doubtful, yet thought all was fine
Now the grim reaper has my soul
And you too have each other's
Continue to hold the other's half heart
The dark angel has my other

Copyright © PainfulSpirit06 ... [ 2005-06-08 10:37:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Soul Death (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 02:56:01 PM AEST
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Wow I feel some bitterness and hate in this one...Good expression.
Scorp.

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