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If being that happiest that I can be means
Being at the top of the tallest mountain
With the wind,
Billowing all around me
And every where I look I can see
The beauty of the world

And being the saddest I can be means
Being at the bottom of the deepest chasm
Where it’s dark and frightening
And if I look skywards
I can just about see the beauty of the world,
It’s trapped on the outside

Then I am on the small patch of grass
At the foot of the mountain
At the top of the chasm
Where the birds are singing but it’s quite annoying
Where the sun is shining but it’s too hot
And If stand in the shade I’m freezing in an instant
I shall proclaim this place to be my own and I will call it
Indifference
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Indifference

Contributed by declinefoale on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:23:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Indifference

If being that happiest that I can be means
Being at the top of the tallest mountain
With the wind,
Billowing all around me
And every where I look I can see
The beauty of the world

And being the saddest I can be means
Being at the bottom of the deepest chasm
Where it’s dark and frightening
And if I look skywards
I can just about see the beauty of the world,
It’s trapped on the outside

Then I am on the small patch of grass
At the foot of the mountain
At the top of the chasm
Where the birds are singing but it’s quite annoying
Where the sun is shining but it’s too hot
And If stand in the shade I’m freezing in an instant
I shall proclaim this place to be my own and I will call it
Indifference

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Re: Indifference (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 02:16:15 AM AEST
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Be like the first verse.Indifference is a lonely place

Re: Indifference (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 03:08:07 AM AEST
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this is a really good way of looking at life...indifference is the aim of people in the deepest chasm...the whole metaphor is beautiful...

Re: Indifference (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 12:56:05 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this, indifference is a good place to be.

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