Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 13:23:30 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 97241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Like Me [time] => 2005-06-07 22:39:11 [hometext] => Ppl think i'm crazy when I say this but I wrote down what a voice inside me was saying. [bodytext] => Dear Child,
do not try to hide
you've told him
how you feel inside
now let love
take it's coarse
do not try
to make things forced
don't take your anger
out on them
don't tell them
that their souls' condemned
try to laugh
your whole life through
don't let your past
try to haunt you
live each day
like it's your last
smile it through
forget your past
Use this adivice
and just maybe
you won't turn out
to be like me.
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Yuri [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Like Me

Contributed by Yuri on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:39:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Dear Child,
do not try to hide
you've told him
how you feel inside
now let love
take it's coarse
do not try
to make things forced
don't take your anger
out on them
don't tell them
that their souls' condemned
try to laugh
your whole life through
don't let your past
try to haunt you
live each day
like it's your last
smile it through
forget your past
Use this adivice
and just maybe
you won't turn out
to be like me.

Copyright © Yuri ... [ 2005-06-07 22:39:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Like Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:41:16 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

good poem.

smiles,
Rita

Re: Like Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:44:51 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

good work.
I don't see why others want believe u 'cause after all we channle voices from different places. it's the inner voice that makes each writer unique.
huggs,
emy

Re: Like Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Yuri on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:46:58 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Thank you.

Re: Like Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:47:55 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

the only way you can hear other voices in your head is if your possessed...but good poem

Re: Like Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Yuri on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:48:49 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Thanks for beleiveing me.

Re: Like Me (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:00:53 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Sweet stuff, it's good to listen to your inner voice, it sounds like yours
is right on track too. My favorite bit was the part about not letting
your past haunt you. That's important.

Nice job.
~Kara

Re: Like Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Yuri on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:13:57 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Thank you again!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com