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Array ( [sid] => 97228 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => last chance to say goodbye [time] => 2005-06-07 21:06:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Forcing closer
facing the end
chasing these dreams
feelings suspend
a heartless choice
feeling revenge
another day in paridise?
this lifes only pretend
can u hear the screaming
these screams from deciet
from life in a lonley prison
from living a life of defeat
my mind is spinning
im gasping for air
my heart is spilling
and my eyes are a stare
i feel free
free from the lies
the lies that have me wondering
the lies that make me cry
tomorrow i wonder
if things will become clear
i know its only a wish
a wish they will not hear
i tend to always wonder
why im still alive
to make this final choice
the choice i cant decide
but i know if things were different
i couldnt hardly stand
losing all the memories
of what i once had
you cannot hide from the hurt
the pain is alreay caused
this hearts to shatterd
shatterd from the loss
the past is only a hint
a hint to what the future will bring
if only i could fix my past
the future would be like a dream
i could count the stars
and watch the time pass by
till i can feel my soul lifting
lifting to the skies
but i have more to live for
like to deal with all the pain
its all im used to doing
thats why my heart is staind
so goodbye i wont miss
miss the life ive lived
i know you wont cry
these eyes will remain dry
but i know you will finally live
live the life without me......
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 22 [informant] => cooley1818 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
last chance to say goodbye

Contributed by cooley1818 on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:06:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Forcing closer
facing the end
chasing these dreams
feelings suspend
a heartless choice
feeling revenge
another day in paridise?
this lifes only pretend
can u hear the screaming
these screams from deciet
from life in a lonley prison
from living a life of defeat
my mind is spinning
im gasping for air
my heart is spilling
and my eyes are a stare
i feel free
free from the lies
the lies that have me wondering
the lies that make me cry
tomorrow i wonder
if things will become clear
i know its only a wish
a wish they will not hear
i tend to always wonder
why im still alive
to make this final choice
the choice i cant decide
but i know if things were different
i couldnt hardly stand
losing all the memories
of what i once had
you cannot hide from the hurt
the pain is alreay caused
this hearts to shatterd
shatterd from the loss
the past is only a hint
a hint to what the future will bring
if only i could fix my past
the future would be like a dream
i could count the stars
and watch the time pass by
till i can feel my soul lifting
lifting to the skies
but i have more to live for
like to deal with all the pain
its all im used to doing
thats why my heart is staind
so goodbye i wont miss
miss the life ive lived
i know you wont cry
these eyes will remain dry
but i know you will finally live
live the life without me......




Copyright © cooley1818 ... [ 2005-06-07 21:06:18]
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Re: last chance to say goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 01:25:58 AM AEST
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One can feel the pain and that's sad but your writing rocks.




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